rate_review Reviews

So very glad you weren't insulted. It's hard to be honest and encouraging in a review, without coming off as a tool.I will now shoot myself in the head, your explanation makes complete sense (and now that you've given it, completely obvious). I know it's a big ask, but in my humble and hopeful opinion another chapter (just one) where he gets her out or they die trying would be really satisfying. Completely understand if you don't want to.

I'll read anything else I come across that you write, because lately I have read a lot of poorly written fiction. Someone with decent grammar, spelling and structure skills is getting harder to find. You're one of the good ones.

THE HELL YOU SAY....NOT WORTH IT?!!! GET YOUR MUSE IN GEAR AND SAVE HERMIONE.......and they live happily ever after ^^

This isn't a flame. (Just incase this comes out wrong)

I both liked and hated your story. It was well written and made sense structure wise and all that technical rubbish.

I think what I didn't like was the content, especially the ending. I think because it seemed from the way you wrote Draco that he was adverse to raping her. Then at the end he's like, so what. That didn't sit right with me.

But yeah I appreciate your talent in writing this, even if it isn't my cup of tea. Keep writing and I'll keep reading :)

Draco is absolutely horrible, great story :-)