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Two chapters at once. Wonderful :)
Such a sweet little date. His wishes seem to be working in his favour. Loved the way that he's being such a gentleman, very rare these days. Loved the Valentines present for his genie. Very sweet.
I want more please

Now this is sweet. Most people just jump into the sex without considering what came before or after; you're taking your time, and that's good to see.

Not that there's anything wrong with just jumping into the sex, of course. Just that a lot of people don't handle it right, is all. I bet you could handle it fine, though you're doing an excellent job with this right here.

The only flaws are a few spelling and grammar issues, and you mix up your pronouns at times as well. Aside from that, an excellent read!

Ah, the courting period. Very good work on the slow build up.

hehehehehe Seamus got what he had coming to him. Very well written. I had to read several chapters at once, which is always a pleasure. I love what you have developing with Pansy. LOL especially her suggestion to Millicent that Hermione and Draco would be a good match (would be hilarious if you threw that in and have Ron telling Hermione that Draco is the sort of boyfriend she needs)

I like the way you have Pansy and Ron's relationship develop through small inxonsequential meetings. The shy smiles, the glances all so romantic. Also liked the way you dealt with Hermione and the studying problem. Such a wonderfully well written story. It left me feeling all gooey and happy. If there were any huge errors or bad spelling your wonderful characterisations and plot made me miss them.

Looking forward to reading more chapters. Well done! *hugs* :)

Hmm. Surprised that Seamus/Ron argument didn't end up in an outright fist fight. Lucky that Seamus is all talk.

Interesting to see where this pairing is going. Obviously with your user name Pansy/Ron is not entirely unexpected, though I admit I'd been thinking we were going to end up with Ron/Demona in this one instead.

Only really negative thing I can say is I've noticed a tendency to uses 'your' when you mean 'You're' So maybe when you're proof-reading this you can look out for that? (your is possessive eg Your hair looks nice. You're is short for you are eg you're looking nice today)

Chapters 8-12 were apparently going up at the same time I was trying to review, never had that happen before, lol...they just kept adding and adding! Loved the confrontation with Seamus, who needs to have his weenie hexed off and fed to the squid, or he should be double-teamed by Crabbe and Goyle. Nasty little git. More, please!

Oh, I am utterly charmed by this story so far! The genie is so sweet and loves Ron just as much as I do. :) I can't wait to see what Ron does with his new-found understanding of women. :)

What an original story! Never seen a fan story based on a genie before. Ordinarily I'm not a Ron fan, I think he's hot headed and stupid. However I'm enjoying the way you've portrayed him here.

Really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Can I guess what his third wish will be? He'll wish his genie's freedom. (That's the sort of soppy romantic notion I'm known for.)

You really are casting Hermione in a bad light. I understand why and it works for this story. Trust her to get all snooty becasue someone else is displaying some brains, although she could also be feeling threatened as well.

Please update soon. If you'll write, I'll read. And I'll try and review it all.

I'm amazed how quickly this fic is proceeding. Good stuff.

i absolutely love all your stories (yes i've read them all!!!) I'm enjoying this one so far, I can't wait for the next chapter :D

~*MDL*~