rate_review Reviews

Ack! Chapter 17 is broken! It's making me twitchy knowing chapter 18 is out there!!!!! Pls fix!!!!

Anyways, I think you are doing an incredible job of showing Ron & Pansy fall in love. Their sweet little date was adorable, and her confession to him about Blaise was well done, too. You know you're the reason I even like this pairing, don't you??? Keep up the good work!

RoR sex! The best kind :D Very nice work. I wonder when Pansy will find out about Demona and how she will take it?

Great!! Until next time...

~*MDL*~

Yoou make me wish my first boyfriend had been even one quarter as considerate! Lovely chapters, and I really do feel bad for poor Demona.

With all due respect, the Seamus bashing here is stupid. I hate to tell you, but males like Seamus (and there is nothing wrong with them) are OBVIOUS that they are only out for a quick shag, and there is absolute, zero, NOTHING wrong with that..... as long as they are honest with the girl about that.

I know from experience.... I am like that myself, told the girl that I was only in it for a quick shag and that I was WAY too fickle to be tied down with ONE girl, and they were fine with it. At least, 98% of them were.... the only ones who WEREN'T were religious brainwashed or had been raised with the idea of 'true love' which is TOTALLY non-existent. Never existed, never has existed, never WILL exist.

I've gone back and read most of your other works, but personaly this is the one I like most. I love the character interaction as well as how you delt with Seamus being a jerk. I've come to admire this pairing thanks to your works, even if at first I was confused about how it would work. I've nothing negitive to say about this or any of the ones I have read. I hope your muse lets you come up with plenty more stories for this couple. In other words keep up the good work.

I love your story!.... its amazing. i like every single chapter and i think i want demona and ron to have umm not sex but i want her to teach him how to please a woman, just once bcoz they have nice relation and at some point i think demona like ron and it will also make there relationship stronger.

plzzz update soon. i am so curious to know what happen next.
take care and thx

Great two chapters. The broom ride and picnic was so romantic. I like the way they can talk about anything. What a great relationship. I don't know how Demona is going to help him. Maybe a sex technique film. I only hope you don't have Demona offering herself as a means of education. Maybe she can show him memories of previous "masters" involved in sexual activities.

Whatever you do, I'm looking forward to it. Please update soon :)

Chapters 15/16. I liked it and I like that they haven't jumped straight into it. Some of the dialogue seemed a bit too 'to the point' really, people tend to beat about the bush more in real conversations but otherwise its very good.

As with the above reviewer, I hope Demona isn't going to be giving him any 'practical lessons' so to speak; its seems to be me your Ron is probably going to want his first time to be special and probably won't want to cheat on Pansy.

loving it... i don't even want to guess. i'm going to just wait. :D


~*MDL*~