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i love this story, can you have the reason hermonie tries to help ron is becouse she afraid that if he does not need her help with school work then he wont be her friend. great story

I love this story! It was so good! Way to go Ron. I love the way you wrote him in this...awesome! Great, great story!

Great and wonderful like always. Hope to read more. Can't wait. I LOVE this pairing so much!

Beast (Patrick)

I know that i have reviewed your story, but i can't get enough from all of them. This pairing is faboulus. (i think that this is wrong spelled *g*)

Hope to see more soon. More, more more!!!!

Beast (Patrick)

PS: You asked for a few situations, that we can suggest? I don't know if i'm asking too much or even take you aback, hopefully not. I write it here and you can think about it, please don't feel presst to anything.

I'm a lot like Ron and in my own real life i'm the submissive person, that needs the hand of a women, who can help and guide me a little bit, so i can, let myself fall and enjoy. *g*

How about, (please don't think i'm sick) you would Pansy dominate Ronald, as a mistress. It, fantazies me, to think about being bound and domiated by women and to do, what they ask of me, bind me etc.

thanks for listening

That was a sweet ending! I'm glad Ron used his last wish to set Demona free, I had a feeling we were going there. :)

For the record, it was entirely clear that Seamus was lying about what he said to Susan. Nobody has any problem with sex for it's own sake, as long as everyone is honest about it; Seamus was not honest, and was telling lies to sweet talk Susan into something she didn't want (sex with no strings attached). Your writing was not unclear at all.

Well it was fairly obvious that that as going to be his final wish. Though the one year later thing was a bit of a surprise. the No Ron/Demona sex either. :P

As to Seamus, I thought it was fairly obvious how he was supposed to have deceived Susan. Nor did I think it was especially unrealistic portrayal. As the other reviewer said; some guys are up front about if all they want is sex BUT not all guys are like that. Some are bastards and do exactly what Seamus did. I think it worked.

As to Ron/Severus. I'm not into M/M so I wouldn't read it but I'm sure there are lots of people who would.

I knew he was going to free her. YAY :) Beautiful and sweet story. Well done and good way to end it with their marriage. I loved the way you had him love Demona, in an almost sisterly manner. (Like the big sister he never had.) I happen to think you got the thing with Seamus across just fine. He lied his way into Susan's knickers was the way I would put it.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Grwat story. It gets better and better with each of them. Hope to read more in the future.

I can only say WOW!

Great like always and also hot to faszinate about. I like the loving site of the storie, even if it's a tad bit sad on Demonias way of life.

I Would really like for her to find happyness in the end, in den real world and that Ron, set her free with his last wish and the two of them become friends or so.

Please write more soon

with all my respect for your writingskills and ideas *gently lifts your hand and kisses the back of it*

Killthebeast (Patrick)

OMG!!!! Something terrible happend!!! Where is the rest of chapter 17...i'm so lost right now!!! Please tell me ur going to upload it again I can't read 17 without it.


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