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for Too Much of A Good Thing

by KohakuShadow

schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this, and it surprised the crap out of me! I usually hate Snape as bottom. People tend to make him to feminine. You did a amazing job. Kudos
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your story was recced by hazelwolf in http://asylums.insanejournal.com/bottomsnape/ (nc-17 entries are friendlocked though.)

i hope many readers will drop by, read your little gem of porn, er, story, and leave their love here for you!
person QueenB
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
underpromised and overdelivered! - this was absolutely funny and delicious. obviously the question if snape is in canon or not is a bit of a moot point here! who cares? yay for the unapologetic and straightforward porn! and it's very noble of you to have contributed something to the dwindling species of bottom!snape fics! you did a good thing here :D

i sincerely hope it's something you liked because more of this would be better!

the question "boxers or briefs" is amusing and i'll write you an email about it, if you're not already completely spammed with replies :D
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In all honesty... I say briefs, and I'll tell you why. We are talking about a man who all but exudes sex, grace, power, and dominance. He's the epitome of sexy, breathtaking, and with fluid motion that just says "I'm a man who either wears briefs or nothing at all" I just honestly can't see him as a boxer type of man. I see him more in briefs that are form hugging and made of expensive materials... the one thing he splurges on in a moment of weakness.

Pairings: Severus/Harry (Yes I am that obsessed), and allow me to beg now for a story:

Submissive Sev... something about this... *Shivers* And it's not written enough! I long to see Severus let loose... much like in your fic. Size Whore... needy... and completely and utterly submissive. I have an idea I'd like to share with you... I plan to attempt to write this as a Harry/Sev idea one day with Harry being the submissive, but if you decide to choose my pairing then I would love to see it done as Severus being the submissive. A well kept secret... Severus is Putus Obsequium. Purely Submissive in other words. There are NONE left in the world as these types of Wizards/Witches tend to be badly abused by those who claim them and only ONE can claim them. The one meant to be their Master. When the inheritance strikes is up to you specially considering Sev is the Sub in this if you do it. They are extremely needy and obedient. They also have a um... heat I suppose you could say... which strikes at random and upon entering it they need the one who owns them immediately no matter where they are. The Dom will know ALWAYS. They are masochistic but not overly so, they enjoy being slammed against walls and taken roughly... etc etc. That's the idea, but anyway wanted to say awesome story and thank you in advance for offering something like this. I'll definitely be reading you whether you take up this idea or not!

~Lady Aqualyne
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story was amazing! I absolutely loved the idea that Snape secretly enjoyed to read muggle romance novels. Great job with the characters and internal debates. Definately one of my faves!
person Aroyo
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One of the seksiest snarries I've read in a while and Snape's the bottom! :( Life's just not fair sometimes. I managed to get through it though and surprisingly liked it. Thanks for posting.
person JanisJ
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, cool and interesting new twist. Good job!

Usually Snarry with top!Snape makes sense cuz of his domineering personality and Harry seems like he'd be inexperienced but in this case the top!Harry worked I think cuz he's somewhat experienced and incredibly eager (and courageous enough to pursue living out his fantasies). And Snape's desire to surrender/let go of control kinda makes sense too.

And oh, man! This line had me laughing so hard and loud that my dogs were wondering if I was ok-- too fucking funny!: 'Really, it was a miracle he didn't have a pair of boners staring watery-eyed at Snape already.'

OK, I'm going to email you my underwear and pairing vote.... Keep on writing, I like your style :)