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for Too Much of A Good Thing

by KohakuShadow

schedule March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
ohhh my god that was hot
person LyraRFIM
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Gods. I laughed so hard at parts of this story... As Harry would say, "I love magic!", and would like to add "and Potions and their Masters..." to that! Thanks, I will be re-reading much of your work, soon.
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very funny and hot )
person Blissa97
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I love this story. it is awesome. I was kinding of hoping that you might let me try and write a story with the same base idea ( messed up potion, duplicate body parts) but with harry and the twins? If it works out I will send you a copy and give you a shout out, but I would like your permission first. Let me know if I can try.

Thanks,
Nocturnal Insomniac
person Alex Nox
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell!! That was brilliant, mate! And you have a certain irony to your writing, altogether with a brilliant put-out situation and brilliantly well-thought phrases (that might have been a pleonasm, but nevermind) that certainly makes your fic SOOOO MUCH MORE than pure porn, rather than what can be found most in fandom. And the evolution of their love towards each other is so brilliantly tied up and build up along the story that makes this piece, in a word, unique. It almost makes a Snarry shipper possible even in the cannon.
person Kya
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was AMAZING! So well written and so fucking DELICIOUS!
person winoniel
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was great: witty, hot, delightfully sweet! You called it a PWP, but it was a PWP with seriously legs! Great job.
person minijo
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!

That was one great PWP!
Great detail, great descriptions!
And the idea of Harry duplicating that part of his anatomy was just great!!
OK I've just used the word "great" 4 times in 3 sentences, so I think you get my appreciation for your story!!
Do it again and don't feel ashamed of it!!!!

Bye
Sanchan
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A wonder story of smut. I liked the two heads deal and the intercourse was aMaZing!!

Keep up the good work.