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by l3petitemort

schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the Gryffindor 'boys being boys' in this. It was funny and sexy and the little implied H/R only made it better, I love that pairing (: yayy
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was hilariously funny and hot! Hee hee hee. Dean as "Jizz Judge" was hysterical!
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seriously this is one of the funniest fics I have read in an age! I don't see Neville as being quite so bold but the way you wrote him fitted perfectly and Dean being the 'Jizz Judge'....ahahahahahaha!

Great stuff!
person JanisJ
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was funny AND cute AND hot! Rare to get all three in one fic. Good job! Ahhhh, I love horny, pervy boys :)