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Meh, it was doomed to happen sooner or later. Somehow, time will do a jig and then we end up with an alive Hermione again. I'm sorry to say that this ending doesn't really upset me. I'm more sighing "finally". I don't know why, but I've got so annoyed with the time travellers group I want them all dead. They are just stuck in this "no, I want to sacrifice myself for you. No, I do. No, me!" in every single chapter! It's in character and all, but I still find it so frustrating. Hence my "finally"-sigh. I'm hoping Hermione will be separated from the group now and get back with Tom. I do believe he will be the one to find a way to bring Hermione back.

Where is Tom btw? What happened with his duel with Dumbledore? Dumbledore obviously lived, but since he was worried about the Elder wand ending up in Voldemort's hands, that means Tom is alive as well. Did they call a truce when Grindelwald disappeared?

I'm also wondering what you are planning to do with Nicholas since you brought him up in this chapter as well.

And kudos on the excellent fighting scene. They are so hard to write!

As to the other three: more killing please.

Good luck with the next chapter!

That was just plain EVIL!!!! That better not have been the end of the story, although that would make a particularly good early April Fools Day prank. I love this story. And I really hope you update soon.

They never stop babbling, do they? Where is my smut?! Oh well, at least it was an informative chapter. Very interesting. Ill try to review again when Im on my computer without mum next to me. Toodles for now!

Awesome ... I haven't read this in awhile ... Lol
THanks for the update.

awww, no smut? I'm disappointed! lol

I say ... finally an update. But how can you update on Valentine's Day, have them naked throughout the entire chapter and forego with our much needed SMUT!?!!!

I daresay the birthday girls won't be amused. I know, even though I'm not one of them and a total and complete as well as utter stranger, that Miya and Nyers like their Tomione smut. So naked Tom, naked Hermione and noooooo smut! Tom Cripple does not approve of this message.

Here is what Tom Miffle does approve of:

The Ten Commandments of Fanfiction:

First: Thou shalt always worship our Lord, your master.

Second: Thou shalt always write smut.

Third: Thy smut better be long and kinky.

Fourth: Said smut should be between our Lord and MEEEEEE! (Otherwise known as Hermione.) T_T

Fifth: Readers shalt require their Hermione Voodoo Dolls (registred trademark) whilst reading thy chapter.

Sixth: Thy smut should be everywhere and at any time.

Seventh: Thy shalt not have a life or pretend to have one and forego on thy update responsibilities.

Eight: Thou shalt not commit the horrors of writing Hermione with third, unworthy parties, such as Draco, Ron, Snape, Lucius (for full list, see my homepage).

Nine: Thy fanfiction shalt be written promptly and without delay.

Ten: Thy fanfiction shalt not have evil cliffhangers EVA!

From hereon, I expect full compliance with these rules. If not, be aware that ... You. Have. Been. Warned.

much lurve,

Tom Icklle.

PS. I <3 chapter.

Tom Icklle: I wanted to say that I luuuuurved thou story with a nice symbolic heart for Vday. But I'm not allowed to use < and a 3 together.

So hereby: Loooooved it.

xx F!T

As if your story could not have more brilliant, you through the wand plan which is amazing! This is on EPIC story. I've never been so dedicated in reading a story since Homer's Iliad, H.Potter series and The Qu'ran(Arabic Version).

Okay, so after a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong pause, I finally came back.
I must say Hermione annoyed the heck out of me. "Blah, blah, blah" Yes Hermione, we don't want to listen to you. You are only good for 1 thing: To make the Dark Lord react (which I must say, you do very well, although you can get veeeery annoying).
Is it okay to drool again? I don't think I've drooled for some time now...
Oooh, she likes his handsome face better? Well, I don't care. Hmf! I like my Lord either way! *blows kiss*
Hahaha, Draco's reactions are so priceless xD Well, he did have a point. If Tom doesn't kill him for turning sides, he will deffo kill him for being near Hermy.

ARGH, I hate how this isn't a long review.. anywaaay, I loved the chapter, and it was good you had updated, or else I wouldn't have bugged you to death. xD

I look forward to an evil cliffhanger, so I can hunt you down.

FINALLY!! Have waited eons for this chapter. I LOVED it! You`re so, so talented. Can`t wait till the next one.

Love Rebecca!