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HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII, Serp! (sorry again for bothering)
I was rereading it (again, again, again, again, again, again, again, again) and when I reached chapter 8 I saw that when Ginny's PoV ended, there was a new paragraph, but it was EXACTLY the same as before, which means that you may accidentally have put it up twice. Or... put the whole chapter twice in one chapter. Which is chapter 8... I'm unnecessarily confusing myself now.
Anywaaay, I hope I got my message across -_-

Have a nice day :D *hugs*

OMG. That was the worst cliffy ever. You are so evil! Hermione can't die! I hope you plan to update soon, because I'm beside myself, lol. Anyway, great chapter, the suspense was very well done. UPDATE SOON. I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.

This reminds me an awful lot of Masters of Manipulation... On [insert date here] Hermione Granger died at the hands of [insert killer here]. Therefore I love the ending. Loved Nerys stories.

absolutely loving this, please update again soon

DAMN! You left it at such a cliffhanger! p.s I saw your message at the bottom about needing someone for grammar? Could help if you like :)

LOL you've killed off Hermione!! :D How cool is that?

I can't wait to see whether Tom brings her back or just waits for her to be born again - although wait, that doesn't seem to work out since she couldn't be the same person...unless of course now is the time when it all comes back full-circle and Harry never really killed Tom in the original timeline, either... gah, I get so confused by this time business. I'm glad you don't. ;)

HOLY SHIT!
:O
*speechless*

And a new chapter! Yaay! Eh... that doesn't mean I've forgiven you for Dudley, dear.... But I still love you! :D xD LOL

"he would make comments about how and why he didn't think certain ideas would work" - You know, either Draco is a very good observer or he's a Seer. I mean... EVERYTHING he said in this fic has come true, one way or another. Take him seriously sometimes, dammit! xD

"There were no Knights standing outside" - Why do I have the feeling that there is a very good reason to NOT go out?

""No wonder we had a good night's sleep last night," Draco muttered as he ran his hands through his hair." OMG! HAHAHAHAHA! May I ask you if you are actually talking through Draco, cause sometimes there are comments he makes that makes me think that it's something YOU would say... and blame another person for xD xD xD

And of course... Self preservation is a Slytherin trait, so of course the "nobel" Gryffindor's are bullying him for it. Poor little thing. He can't get reassurance here or there. *cackles evilly*

Blood, blood, blood... ugh...

Uncle Gellert... That made me laugh.. Sounds funny xD

"Finally, they caught sight of a familiar white-blond head of hair hiding behind a tree while others were dueling farther away." - The Malfoys are a misunderstood kind of creatures and they deserve our utmost respect... NOT. This is hilarious! I love how you've made it more like the "family" trait than anything else. xD xD

Oooh, clever thinking Draco, clever thinking...

Somehow I KNEW that Dumbles would make his entr

MOURNING
Can't believe I just read that.
All for the greater good!!!
Albus Fucking Dumbledore!!! How I HATE YOU!!!
But Tom is gonna travel back time and be there before Albus kill her. She can't die.
If she dies, the fic is gonna end... so I know she is gonna be back!
Now they are gonna follow Tom... No doubts about it.
If they don't, they are idiots!
Can't wait fdor the next chapter! Kisses.

This was a really good chapter. I don't think I have to say much: the plot was great, and I liked how the personality changes Dumbledore had were actually explained (unlike many, many other fanfics). Funny Draco is funny,Clever Hermione is clever, and brave (reckless) Harry is brave.
So yeah, great chapter, however...

" On February 25, 1950, Hermione Granger died at the hands of Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore."
This shall not go unpunished.
Never mind the wards, you can run,but you can't hide.