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for Somewhere in Time

by serpentinred

person AlasseaM
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First reaction: *dance* Yaay! Serp has updated

Guess I shouldn't have done that, cause even the April's Fool prank didn't make me as sad.

Oh, Serp! *clutches desperately to over wet tissue*

I'm damn crying my eyes out! This was so sad! First I cried at Riddle's... behavior even when he knew she was dead. He wasn't crying, of course, (*shudders of disgust*) but his actions were enough. *sob*

Then Draco's reaction. I really, really, don't think I've cried so much (see, I had just stopped crying at the end of the chapter, and now while I'm writing this I'm crying again!!). Amazing writing. *tries to laugh, but sounds awkward*

Then Harry's reaction. When he came out of the shock state it made me cry even more. I was hiccuping and crying through the whole thing! *Bawls*

It was so hard to concentrate and the fact that Riddle didn't even bother to talk to his Knights was really telling. I don't think I've cried so hard in a fan fiction!!!!!!!!!

Now I'm wondering what he is going to do exactly. Riddle, I mean.

And I seriously hope he kicks Dumble's ass! The FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

*takes a deep breath but ends up sobbing again*

Update soon, cause if I'm going to reread this without any continuation, I'm definitely going to be depressed (not that I can stop rereading).

I really felt like killing you for this, but what the hell. It was good anyway. *dries face*

*sniffs and snorts* My tissue is not the only thing my tears reached. My pillow and shirt too x'D

- Moaning-Allie
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sooo, you begin the chapter by having Draco doing something clever? WHAT HAVE THE WORLD COME TOO?

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW! Tom is being sad :( That was a very will written scene. BUT YOU DIDN'T TRICK ME INTO CRYING. MOHAHAHAHAHAHA! *Miya happy for thwarting Serp's evil plan to make her readers sob*

Sorry, even when Draco is sad he annoys me. Sigh... it's kind of cute, I guess... but he is Draco! He is annoying! It's in his blood!

Uhuh, Tom storing Hermione's body? This can't be good...

Haha! Harry wanting to kill Dumbledore have me thinking about that "Harry Potter in five seconds"-clip... have you seen it? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aeYOdgwByLc

Yay! Excellent chapter! Really much action and progress going on :) Will eagerly await the next chapter!
person Ujala
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! Hermione can't die! You've captured Riddles reaction so well though, brillaint writing. Dumbledore needs to die. Always in the fucking way.
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are evil. So freaking evil. *cries*

Hermione you can't be dead for good ok, you got to come back. Because. My emotions right now. You can't just leave Tom all alone. ;~;


Meep. I have nothing else to say because while the chapter was good I spent the whole time crying and it's your fault that people are looking at me weird!
person Tori
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I object ! At cliffhangers! however I can not wait for the next chapter, I thank the writer so for this lovely story because it is a big favorite of mine. The story works in so many ways and I can't wait to see the new timeline and herm (being alive I hope) Comes back. Please please get the next chapter up
person Shamonti
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I'm speechless. The way you handled Tom's reaction so delicately was beautiful - it made me shed a lot of tears. But what broke my heart was the reaction of Draco's and his whole array of emotions - it was breath-taking! I truly felt his anguish. I loved how you gave each character their own grieving method, Harry being stotic in the begining and then revealing his pain, Ginny being more up-front about her pain and Draco with his fraustration. And of course there's Tom's revenge fueld craze that was filled with denial of Hermione's death. How could I missed that, it was crazy!
What an amazing chapter!
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
a *special* hell...
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Im laughing so hard at your April Fools Chapter. When I read the first few lines I was like "Did I forget something about the previous chapter?" but then I was like. OMG SERPIE YOU AND YOUR FREAKING APRIL FOOLS CHAPTER! and sure enough the whole thing was freaking Pikachunese. xD

I am so angry. I'm laughing. But mad. :P

I hope you plan on updating tomorrow otherwise I just might go recruit Voldy (I'm sure he isn't pleased about having to argue like a Pikachu)and we'll go all Misery on you and break your legs and force you to write until the story is finished. xP

By the way, I just realized I've been faithfully following this story for at least 3 years now.

It's worth it. :P
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was cruel...
person Maddie
schedule April 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was just cruel! Here I was getting suuuper doooper excited for what the heck was going to happen after Hermione dies, and instead I get Pikachu talk. D':

Ah well, the Pikachu talk was hilarious. All shall be forgiven! I hope you update with the actual chapter soon! I love love love your story! Its amazing!