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Yay! Come back after vacation and have finished all the other fics I was reading and see that you have three new chapters out! WIIIH! And sooo much is happening in them! Ginny and Harry coming back, Draco being tortured and... Tom and Hermione having sex! Okay, so it was rather non-con on Hermione's part, but still... she seemed to enjoy it after a while. It will be really interesting to see how she will react afterwards. Tom seemed awfully happy when he realised she was a virgin anyway, so I guess he will be even more possessive now, eh? Oooh, and I wonder if Hermione will be able to keep this from Ginny... she seemed quite suspicious about their relationship. In all fairness, I guess. And I wonder how Draco feels right now! Ooh, did he see the two of them have sex? No, wait, Tom locked the door. I wonder if Draco will be able to guess what happened... hm... it will be interesting to see the next chapter to say the least. This was a major turn on the plot anyway! Great job!

Thank you again for the email.
Claps like a 5y/o singing Draco got Curcioed!

Omg Hermione is evil! she used an unforgivable. Tom has to marry her now!
Is Hermione turning into a vampire? Just wants the blood not the flesh?

RAPE! I want next time for her to beg for it.

Ok Now I think it's time Tom Publicly states his claim on Hermione as his girlfriend and leaves her no choice!

We have smut! We have smut! *does a happy dance* And what a great smut it was! :D

I seriously think you should put a n/c rating on this fic, or atleast dub-con. Because immobilizing her down on a sofa and using a lust charm or whatever (you mentioned that she was feeling "slightly off") doesn't really sound consentual in my book. Better add a warning just to be safe, though that's just a suggestion.

Okay, on the chapter. First of all, I realise that this isn't a very appreciative review but I really like this story and I hope you can accept some constructive criticisms. I find Hermione's actions in this chapter absolutely laughable. Alright, so Draco tells her that he's being tortured for hours and what does she do? Tells a teacher? No. Tells Harry and Ginny and asks for advice? No. Makes a plan to shove Veritaserum down Riddle's throat while Dippet is in the same room? No. Instead, she goes to TALK to Riddle! She wants to REASON with the future Lord Voldemort, the guy who already killed Moaning Myrtle and split his soul, the guy who will kill countless of innocent people in the future! I know Hermione is an idealist but this is bordering on stupidity.

And then she enters a room where she sees a tortured Draco collapsed on the floor. My first reaction would be to run and call a teacher. Or try to stun Ridle when he turned his back and run with Draco's body. But nooo, she tries to EXPLAIN to Riddle that Draco is a human being and doesn't deserve this. For crying out loud, she's trying to make a guy who killed his parents see the wrong in his ways! No wonder he crucio-ed her, that's the only in character reaction in the whole bloody scene.

Another part that bothered me: Draco's thoughts during the interrogation. I mean, if he tells Riddle about the future that could bring doom to the whole Wizarding World and the deaths of countless people, possibly including his parents. But he's more worried that Hermione will hex "SNEAK" onto his forehead.. Sigh.

So yeah, I'm sorry this wasn't a nicer review, but if didn't like this story so much I wouldn't have bothered to write it (if that makes sense). If you feel like posting a reply (nice or not) I'll be checking the your review reply page, also Deea101 is the name of my lj account.

Excellent!! This chapter was really amazing! I wonder how Harry, Ginny, and Draco will react once they hear what happened between Tom and Hermione!! HaHa! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

Oh my bloody god! that was brilliant! That was THE most awesome thing! So so so good - that scene was ..almost ..as satisfying as the one during the ball. they're neck and neck in my mind. aargh. so great!! I love the way you've written tom and hermione in this story - your tom is such a sexy beast and hermione is so resistant but so susceptible to him.. gah.. this entire chapter was great. Torturing draco was really well done too! So cold and ruthless and draco's fear was delicious. You are a goddess - produce more of this story!!!!

Wee Thank you for the email.
I saw that and just had to read.
Thank you for the quick update.
How many people can go pinning after Hermione? After my last review been thinking of her as princess Leia and was wondering if she'd kiss her own brother. Then I realized she be an only child. V.v Oh well's Kissing Malfoy in front of Tom will have to do.*chuckle* It was just for sweet revenge. >.> Alphard stealing a kiss in front of Tom would work too. Like right after a quidditch match. who else can she manipulate Tom into getting rid of until the secret is so obvious that dense Harry has to see it.

Oh I have a solution to your Cliffe!
Draco stands in front of the Dark Lord.
Tom: "Draco you will not hang around my girlfriend"
Draco: "WHAT?!?!"
Tom: "Crucio"
Draco: "She's a mudblood"
Tom: "Don't call my girlfriend names""Crucio"
Draco: "She has muggle parents!"
Tom: "She's a witch and that is all that matters" "Crucio" again
Draco: "Owwies"
Tom: "Now treat her like a princess"

No idea where to go from there. Which is probably why my stories never leave the first page. Oh wells
Thank you for the update. Wish to read again soon.

Ayie What a mess. Thanks for the email. I would have reviewed sooner but I wanted to reread the last few chapters so that It all flowed. I've been so busy with work during this holidays I can understand where you don't have the time to update. I barely have the time to read. However this last chapter is short. I can sorta see where Hermione can see Malfoy as a Traitor but not enough evidence to accuse him. Tom must have really messed with her if she is willing to openly accuse Malfoy with so little evidence and without even informing Harry or ginny, and to add insult to injury she goes off alone with Draco into a room right after she accuses him. It's a good thing I beleive he is not a Traitor or she would be walking into a trap. But then again the Trap might be a good thingy cause slave Hermione is Kinky like Slave Leia. Ok end rant I should sleep more work and programing to be done.

THANK YOU *Bows*

I'm shocked this story has so few reviews, it's one of the best Hr/TMR out there, and definitely one of my favorites. ;D

Well, for starters, I love the idea of all four of them time-travelling together, it's very original, and I'm thrilled that you included Draco (one of my favorite HP characters ^_^), though I think he should be more active in the story. I mean, he knows from experience Voldemort's intimidation tactics and I think he could give Hermione some useful advice. Regarding the last chapter, I assume he might have spilled something, but I'm sure he didn't tell everything, like Hermione assumed he did. After all Voldemort put him and his family through, I don't see him risking the future for Voldemort's sake. But enough about Draco. ;]

I also like that the action between Hermione and Tom is going slow, she's obviously attracted to him but she has to realise at some point that he'll be the future Lord Voldemort. I'm especially interested in the Tom's relationship with Iris. I remember at the beginning that Iris was attacked after she annoying the future Dark Lord at breakfast. I'm sure he was behind that and after that he just used her to make Hermione jealous, like in the last chapter. I'm annoyed that Hermione doesn't realise that she's being played so easily. Maybe Draco can tell her? ;D Leaving Draco aside (again), I'm also curious about Tom's ring, the Horcrux. I saw it mentioned in many time-travel fics and I wonder if you'll have him wearing it, it would make an interesting scene if Hermione noticed.

So, after all that rambling, I have a few questions. How many chapters are you planning on writing? Are you planning on using that adult rating? ;D Will they ever return to the future? I've been following this story from the first chapter, and I really hope you dont abandon it.

Curse Thee... I want to find out how Harry reacts. Tom should kiss her in the middle of the great hall next chapter. and she should return the kiss right as harry walks in!

(childish tantrum)I am a loyal reviewer and demand you stop twinkletoesing (is that even a word?) around the issue, and make Hermione fall for Tom.(end Childish tantrum) (the suspense is great well written and well done!)

(Sarcasm)Who needs school and work? you should just write stories taking out loans and selling all your worldly possessions until you are living in a box outside of an internet cafe with your laptop starving. Then maybe you should work a little.(end Sarcasm)

If you want someone to bounce ideas off of or to just talk to feel free to email me. If not can you still email me with updates? Mr.galion At gmail.com

edited: apparently any html tags are removed when posting >.> even if they are fake <.<

One of the best fics I have read on this site in a long time, I read it straight through, can not wait for a new chapter.