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for Somewhere in Time

by serpentinred

person janasi83
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read over some of the reviews and Lady Miya reminded me fo something delicious to look forward to: their waking up together! Gosh I hope it's not a completely cold "oh my god what did I do" kind of thing. I am so ready for Hermione to just accept the fact she and Tom are an item and just deal with it already.
Anyway, I'm totally excited for the next chapter!
person YummyDraco
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I just read your last chapter and all I can tell you is that my husband is going to be very happy tonight. Very well written. Please update soon :)
person kit
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww, even though he's slightly psychotic, I find it sweet how tom is sharing his dark side with hermione and was somewhat pouting over the fact that what he considered ravishing was her definition of rape. once again, fantastic job!
person bluelagoon
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You, my dear, are a goddess. Right now...if I wasn't too busy drooling all over hot!evil!riddle, I would be building altars all over the world for you.

All of us knew Riddle was trouble, but to actually leave poor Hermione like that...begging..until she gives in and says it wasn't rape...talk about being an evil sadistic hot intelligent sexy amazing-in-bed maniac...gosh. I need some air. No, I need an evil sadistic hot intelligent sexy amazing-in-bed maniac...

The scene in the chamber was so amazing...I felt like I was about to die myself, but it was nothing (!) in comparison to your strike of genius at the end...the sofa scene

in the library hermione is wondering if he sat like that on purpose...ehm YES! He knows he has got it and how to make a girl ask...nay beg for more. Of course he knew what his posture was doing to her lol

You know...after reading your fics...than ladymiya and nerys I am sooooo addicted to voldemort/hermione...it is soooo not fair. All three of you really destroyed me for men...I blame you guys for my high expectations ;)

once again thaaaaank you for updating!!!!!
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeeeeeees! Finally! I really liked this chapter! (No surprise there ;)) and I think you are just getting better and better at the whole sex scene-thingy. It was really hot! The only thing that made me sigh was "their tongues battled for dominance". That sentence have become more overused than "my precious" or something like that. It's just so clich
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I'm so glad I thought to check on here--would've hated to miss that smut!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This could simply be my fave chapter of whole story. Thank you for no cliffhangers this time. ^^

Oh and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the last chapter, just so much work with school start and stuff, but I was pleasantly surprised at finding two new chapters when I looked again. And this latest one is really so good I had to read it twice. In a row.
I especially liked that part : "A faint smile curved her lips as something hard brushed the inside of her thigh, and although it was the strangest moment possible, she was glad her knee had not caused that department to stop working." It made me laugh so hard I almost fell off the chair. And that really doesn't happen a lot, so way to go! XD

Anyways, good work as always, and just to let you know, I expect at least 30 more chapters. You wouldn't let me down, would you? *puppy eyes*
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
absolutely LOVE IT
person kit
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sooooo read the newest chapter the day it came out and have re-read it a ton of times since, I just can't get enough! Your cliff hangers just keep on getting more and more painful, I'm going to have to be hospitalized soon if this keeps up. But still, even on my little scratchy sheet hospital bed I will continue to read this story. I love it! Here's to hoping you update soon ;D
person nikky
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is really interesting, especially the cold war between tom and hermione....pls update as soon as possible

*you're a wonderful author