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for Somewhere in Time

by serpentinred

person Rena
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
uhhhh...WHAT!?!?! Now that was just plain mean!! I feel like crying cause of that cliffy!! *starts sniffleing* It's coming along nicely hope you update soon now if you will exscuse me I need to go hide in a corner and be depressed about having to wait...
person janasi83
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You better not come back from your little hideout until you've put up the next chapter! *grumble* Great cliffie though.

Marvelous chapter! I had a blast trying to hold in laughter when Tom and Harry are fighting for Hermione's hand (my boyfriend would have become curious and I don't particuarly want to share AFF with him, he reaps the benefits anyway :)). That is so like teenage boys who've forgotten that they're not 5 anymore LOL.

Can I say what a brilliant writer you are for the umpteenth time? Cause you are. ;)
person bluelagoon
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOU!!!! You better run for you dear life missy...hide under the biggest rock you can find, because i will find you and do terrible things to you for leaving us with such an eeeeeeevil cliffie!!!! And there will be no mercy, because you totally had it coming!!!

wonderful and intense chapter especially the duelling part totally hooked me....ahhh cannot wait to see what happens. he has already dueled with her and saw the wand switching with draco so he will know it is not her wand and ooooh i am so excited to see what happens next!!!

thanks for updating to suuuuper fast btw ;)
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What cliffhanger? WHAT CLIFFHANGER? How dare you. And I wouldn't use bombs. It would be something more ... ahem ... sophisticated *evil grin*

And don't you get tired or I will take the bomb idea into second consideration. Ahem.. So. That chapter was long enough I think.. Even though nobody'll mind some more ACTION *you know what I'm talking about look* and could you kill somebody? Just to satisfy your killing instinct? And for some fun? I'd be soo happy.

Anyways, I still enjoy any new chapter and as long as that continues you don't need any worries to be without reviewers/readers. So keep up with that and as I always say, I freaking love this story.
person Vella
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that cliffhanger!!! Oh my gosh I can't wait. I absolutely adore this story, please update soon :)
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME ! Another cliffhanger? C'mon *annoyed face*

Anyways, I seriously doubt that people will get tired of this story, because you truly know how to make this things interesting.

Oh and this chapter was awfully short in comparison to the previous one. *tears*

Well, I love this evil Tom >:) And keep up with this story for a loooong time, please ! ^____^
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ah, ah, ah, this those not look good for our heroin. I wonder what Tom will do with Harry... I'm quite sure what Harry will try to do with Tom but... ah, this will be very interesting to see the continuing off. But Tom is often sooo annoying with always wanting to have things done his way. Tsk, tsk. I hope Hermione will find a way to take him down a notch or seven. She does have information that he wants... perhaps she could use that to her advantage? Loved the possessive display though. Mehe... looking forward to the next chapter!
person janasi83
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hooraaaaay Hermione wasn't being all stupid! :) Good job! (What did you have to bribe her with? Does she get to knee Tom again? LOL)

Your writing continues to amaze me. I love how blas
person bluelagoon
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
he is an ass...an evil manipulative sneaky hot snog-worthy utterly annoying ass...god...i love him and want to kill him at the same time...and another part of me wants to...ehm...totally going off-top :D

what i meant to say: loooooooved this chapter. while there was no smut *sniffs* it was amusing how he kept on irritating her...one of his favourite past times i guess ;)but i guess she really should remember who she is dealing with...good thing she remembered at last...it is amazing and so disturbing and only something riddle would so: i mean come on...intending to kill a girl and then shagging her a couple of hours later lol

ahhh hot dictators who want to take over both the magical and non-magical world...one certainly cannot live without them...
person janasi83
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh yummy yummy goodness! You have no idea how good this felt after a week long abstinence from the www...
I'm thoroughly taken with the dynamics between the two. I even like how annoying Hermione sometimes is. I keep thinking, stop b****ing around and just give in already LOL but she's got to have her little drama, doesn't she? The little prude. I think I'm joining the Hermione-haters' club - she gets Tom and what do we get? Ummmm I guess we get to live vicariously through her so in effect she's not so bad...right? LOL

Anyway, I love the new chapter (previous one, too) and the lemons - sizzling! :) Thanks!