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YES, AN UPDATE!!! I really enjoyed this chapter, although I am curious to find out what it is you found unsatisfactory about it. The scene with Slughorn was hilarious! A wedding? Kids?! God, I loved how you described Tom's reaction. It's so perfect and I can just imagine it happening. I wonder why Harry isn't pressing Hermione for more information as to why Tom's so obsessed with her, but guys can be dense sometimes. So, did Tom completely remove the venom from Hermione? What's up with the 14th??? I guess I will find out next time.

As usual, excellent work! Your grammar is nearly perfect without a beta, although there were some minor things that I can't even remember now. Anyways, I can't wait for the next update! I wonder how the four are going to explain the whole future thing...

Le gasp! Oh no they've been found out! Lol very nice cliffy though I'm not happy about it ;). Love it so far and I don't think I could ever stop loving it! Tom is great (though really when is he not?) and I love how Hermione is falling for him but even she doesn't relize it yet. Now I wonder how they are going to explain the 'future' comment to Gareth and Joseph, as I'm asuming those are the two people who just came through the portrait hole. Hmmm...maybe Hermione can just you know kick them where the sun don't shine and they can all run away *Snickers* I don't think that joke will ever get old!
On another note, I don't think that anyone is bored with these as you call them long but I say not long enough ;) and if they are send them to me I'll tell them a thing or two!!
As for China I guess I can't blame you I mean not being able to write chapters not only sucks for you but us as well.
Well I believe that's it! The only thing I can say now is I look forward as usual to the next chapter and can't wait to see what question's get answered next!
Rena

What is UP with these cliffhangers? Do you live to torture us? Us, poor defenceless readers who just want some fun... and a little smut...
Haha, I laughed my arse off with the whole children-thing. Oh, Slughorn can really make things interesting! I bet Tom thought about it too... hehe... okay, I don't, but it would be fun if he did. Oooh, I can just see him sitting in front of the fire together with his Death Eaters, knitting socks to his evil offspring. Naaaaaaw! And Abraxas will of course have found the latest unicorn-hair for the socks and they will be drinking tea and sing songs together. Ladidadida.
Hm... I get weird thoughts in my brain when I have PMS. I think about Hermione ripping heads and Tom knitting. Oooh... blood. MOHAHAHA.
Mhem... where was I? Oh, right. I wonder what they will come up with in how to deal with Tom's questions. Or maybe they won't have to because now the gossip will be out that Ginny mentioned the F-word (future). And I'm sure that Tom will put two and two together. And get four little socks! YAY! THEY CAN HAVE TWINS!
Ooooh, well. This will be interesting. I'm sure Harry will do something drastic that will make things even worse. He is good at that. Have I mentioned how much I don't like him in this fic? Oh, well. Good thing most of the focus is on Hermione and Tom these days :) But it was nice when Harry and Ginny was gone. I want them to go away again. OOOH. Let Tom kill them! Pretty please! And throw Draco in the mix as well so it will only be Tom and Hermione 4eva!
Eh... okay, enough ranting. I'll take my hormones and go to sleep, I believe. Toodles :)

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Ahhh stupid internet...my review is gone :( ahh who cares...

You know...everytime i see you have updated your story, i get so damn excited...like a little child at christmas eve...i start reading and the happy feeling gets stronger and stronger. with every word and sentence...and before i know it, i am totally captured and forget everything around me. and suddenly BAM! Reality decides to give me a slap. not a little girly girl slap...NOOOO!!! A Hermione-Granger-slapping-Malfoy-for-being-so-damn-stupid slap

LOL i am a little drama queen at heart hahahaha ;)

Back to the chapter:

I really really loved the duelling scene. How Granger managed to show our favourite Slytherin Heir that girls can hold their ground...ahhh and the punishment...was so very exquisite.

It is so amusing that Harry is so smart and sharp at times, but when it comes to feelings as dim-witted as he was with Cho in 4th year hahaha Malfoy on the other hand is much more observative than given credit for I think.

And last but not least...the REAL punishment. The fact that she knew where to find him...is this a build in feature, so our dark lord does not have to worry that she actually dies, but can be rescued in time...so he can torture her for real? Well, she will have to explain to him why she was discussing the Chamber in the first place...

ahhh I can so not wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update. Looooooove you for this story ^^ I am curious: how far into the story are we? I mean are we already running towards the ends?

These cliff hangers are killing me. I was going to just leave that first sentence as a review, but then I thought that you'd appreciate more feedback. As usual, your writing is excellent and your characters are spot on. I was wondering when that spell that Tom placed on Hermione would come back into play, and so it has in this chapter. I can just imagine Hermione passing out before she makes it to Tom, but I don't really know how long it takes to get to the dungeons or how Hermione's running and panicking affects the spell's effects. And now I'm thinking too much about it.

OH, I CAN'T STAND IT!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! You know, I read the first 34 chapters a second time to hold me over while I was waiting for chapter 35... Now what am I going to do while I wait for 36??? Please update soon!

Now if I was Tom, I'd be seriously pissed with Hermione. I suppose she'll be punished for this - and not just in a pleasant, smutty way!
Tom must be really close to figuring out that they are from the future (if he hasn't already), because what else could explain all of the stuff they know about him, and now the wand business...

Once again an amazing chapter! You hideout strategy is working really well for you, isn't it? :p
Another update can't come soon enough.

Not here agian eh? Well whereever you are I hope your thinking up some more exciting things for this story! Though I wonder how Hermione is going to explain about the spell being actived and what happened with the wands hmmmm...
Also on another note sorry to hear about your godfather's father's funeral, though maybe China was nice? (My pitiful attempt to look on the bright side)
Well as usual I can't wait to see what happens next.
Rena

WOW! I can't tell you how much I love this story. Although the whole travelling back in time thing is not original, what you have done with the characters and plot feels totally new. It is such a treat to read your writing. I love the way you describe Tom Riddle. It just seems so perfect. I also appreciate the fact that the way you write the characters doesn't feel completely out of the ordinary. It all seems so believable. I also can't tell you enough how much I appreciate your efforts to get your fanfic betta'd. Reading a fanfic that is not riddled with numerous spelling and punctuation errors is such a breath of fresh air! I cannot wait to read more of this story!

Now I'm really glad it took me so long to read this chapter (I was reading the first and probably last twilight fanfiction ever. It was really good, but that was mainly because they skipped everything in Twilight that makes it annoying. Like the vampires). I really, really hope you'll manage to update soon! Gaaah, that is not a nice ending! Hundredths of scenarios are swilling around in my mind. Will a connection be formed between Hermione and Tom now? Or will she pretend to miss and then let him hit her? Or will she faint? Naa... she doesn't strike me as the faint-when-things-get-tough kind of girl. Or maybe she will just throw the wand to the side and knock him down physically? Hehe... at least Voldemort got the payback on Draco now. Hope that's it. For poor Draco's sake. Hihi, Draco is the kind of character that I either pity or get annoyed at. I don't really like him... oh, well. And Harry is so ridiculously easy to provoke. It's sooo annoying. He deserves getting his arse kicked. Oooh, well, great chapter! Really looking forward to the next one :)