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for Somewhere in Time

by serpentinred

person Aviendha
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Stupid... I forgot my nickname and used my other one - the above review is mine.
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness there's no cliffhanger. I couldn't stop laughing about the whole Iris thing, but I still hate those Parkinson sisters just the same. I can't wait to see how they four of them are going to go to Germany! I'm still wondering what's up with that deadline that Tom gave Hermione... So many questions left unanswered! Please update soon!
person Nerys
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No cliffie? No cliffie? *takes pulse and feels forehead of Serp* Yep, like I thought, burning up. I knew you were ill the moment there was no cliffie. *brings around hot chicken soup* (which gets tossed away because you're veggie) Okay, hot noodle soup then, while tucking in Serp with extra blankets (must sweat out any germs that caused this no cliffie infection).
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Anyway, I loved the chapter. But you already know that. *giggles* Gotta love the hilarity of all of them talking about the future while Hermione is futily trying to shut them up. XD And poor, pooooor Melantha (yeah, I care; stop sniggering), she'll be in for a rough ride with whatever it is Hermione will do now. I am sure Iris will be pleased she only gets boils when she touches Tom AFTER seeing what happens to Melantha. *snnnrks* No pressure. xxp

So, Gareth is rubbing his left arm underneath his sweater. How possitively interesting.

Oh, I can't wait to hear Tom's questions. You evil author for not adding them in this chapter. I'm so curious.

UPDATE SOON! (although you do write quickly, much quicker than some other authors who have vanished completely from the tomione section altogether *cough* this-is-a-hint-Miya! *cough*). xxp

xx Nerys

PS. Make sure to disillusion Tom when he travels to Germany. We wouldn't want the evil fangirls to snatch him away *insert pointed glare* for he's OURS!
person bluelagoon
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this chapter made me ask myself: how dumb can a person get? i mean...honestly...harry...temper!!!!

he.was.so.utterly.annoying.in.this.chapter.

ahhh does he filter *anything* that comes to his mind before saying it out loud??? it would be so much easier if he would just ask tom to kill him now...instead of waiting a few decades...won't change a thing...because this answer-question with harry in a 3m radius is bound to end ina total disaster -.-

schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Miya was laughing out loud when she read Nerys review :) AND I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED THE RUBBING THING! But that soo makes sense with Ginny never had heard about a relative named Gareth and all... I bet Tom will kill him or have him killed or something. Aaaaanyway. Since Nerys and I have started to converse through this page instead of msn I just want to remind the sweet (oh, well) woman about the brand new story I sent her like... six months ago and which she forgot and then forgot again. Which probably is good since I don't plan to finish it anytime soon... but I do still exist... even if you have to be a real good friend of mine to actually get to read the stories that aren't done yet XD Flattery will get you everywhere, you know!
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait... I became confused. What is Hermione attending? Ah, well, I guess we'll find out soon enough :) I'm happy that you manage to review so quickly. Much quicker than some other authors *cough*this-is-a-hint-Nerys!*cough*. Although, to little Hermione/Tom action! Okay... I always feel that way, but still ;) I do believe the future will have changed quite a bit though, and I'm veeeery annoyed with how stupid Harry and Ginny is, being so eager to tell people about the future. Do they really want to risk changing the future or are they just not thinking that far ahead? Baaah. I wonder what Tom will ask them... hum, probably not just questions about the wand. I'm sure Harry will find some way to screw it up, though. He always do... baaah.
But something tells me Hermione won't be able to keep hers and Tom's... relationship a secret much longer. That will be quite a explosion, I'm sure. Hm... it will be interesting to see how that plays out!
Great chapter :D Take care!
person Rena
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! No cliffie!! Lol man I can't wait for Germany!! It's weird because I'm so excited but it not me who's going! Oh well I really can't wait though and I have a feeling that Tom is going to sneak over there with them, that sneaky boy! And like you said Hermione sure is possessive, I bet she's even going to do something to Melantha or Iris before she goes. Though I wonder if Draco and Harry are going to end up doing anything to stop her from being with Tom cause I mean lets face it Ginny's not!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Rena
person Hungry fan fictions' fan
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update Prisms of Darkness, it is a great story and quite unique, I love how you portrait Hermione's character. Please update soon.
person bluelagoon
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dum dum dum dum *insert dramatic music*

you made my day with your update!!!! thaaaaank you :D

good for her he was in the potions classroom...who knows when he would have cured her if dear sluggy had not come. But hahahaha his acting skills are getting better and better. Honestly?!?! An embarrassed dark lord??? No way.

Loved their little interlude in Muggle Studies btw. bwahahhaha leave it to Hermione to guard her possessions properly :D But he did enjoy this...I mean who else can put a jinx on him and get away with it? If Parkinson had done any of the sorts...well she would be keeping Myrtle company by now I guess ;)

hahahaha cannot wait to read the rest 2/3!!!

A lovely day to you and btw...cannot wait for our dear dark-lord to come to germany hihihihi I will be waiting at the borders and abduct him the second he sets foot on german grounds :D so much to changing the time line ;)

schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry about that earlier. I got your story confused with someone else's. Oops.

Although, I do greatly enjoy this story and am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I feel greatly embarrassed now, though, so I think I'll bow out as gracefully as I can and just patiently wait for the next installment...