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for Somewhere in Time

by serpentinred

person Aviendha
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For some stupid reason I can't get AFF.net to send me my password! Anyway, LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter (previous ones too!)!
It's so wonderful that you're letting the story develop at a slower pace.

And yay for angry, intimidating, slightly crazy Hermione! :D I want to see more of her!
person Rena
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the bathroom they can stay in there all they want lol! I love what Hermione did to Melantha I was laughing so much when I read that and got a mental picture! Germany is turnign out to be better than I imagined!!
So a short story here it does a something to do with your wonderful story of course, anyway when I read stories I also go on youtube and you know how one thing leads to another? Well I have a talent for it seems finding some of the weirdest song on there. And just as Tom locked the bathroom door I found one called 'Sexy' by French Affair. I suggest you give it a listen, I think in my mine it's Tom's new theme song...yes, yes it is...
As for Coulson or Dillane I am afriad I have to go with the Dillane team. He's a good actor but like your thoughts on Dillane I guess I just don't see Tom looking like Coulson. Though I do have to agree on Dillane having boyish looks...maybe that's why I like him though he is the same age as me...don't think I would ever date someone younger though lol. Though Daniil Strakhov a russian actor kind of reminds me of Tom, mostly in the role as Vladimir in 'Bednaya Nastya'. But I must say I caught sight of the comment reply you made to Angel1988 and the links you posted...Mathias Lauridsen is HOT!!! He would also make a great Tom!!
Rena
person e-cam157
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter, it is about time Harry realised that something was going on between Tom and Hermione. I am looking forward to seeing how the others react after Hermione and Tom leave the bathroom.
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I'm really happy that you made my wish come true. But I still think that Ernsta isn't pretty, I imagine her as something like hmm.. Godzila? And you described Dietfried as a not so handsome man himself, so it's not so unbelievable he choosed her XD

Also, I believe I mentioned that you're awesome at writting smut parts, so just keep up with it, and the snake part was very.. ahem.. interesting. In some perv, sick way. Ah who am I kidding, I loved it.

Well, I do love all the chapters so far, so I think I will love all other chapters, but you could kill someone. To spice things up. You know, a person here and a person there...

I think you will need quite a lot of chapters, like, 60 more. Or 70. Or more. Just continue it :D
person Blacklabyrinth8
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Because I have a nasty habbit of saying something wrong and because it's hard to tell tone while typing...Lol. You're the first person I've reveiwed,ever, so nerves were to be expected I'm sure. As for Draco being cruciated...If that's what they call it these days then by all means yes ;)Roflmao. I just finished reading, and, for good measure, rereading and I loooved it and I wonder what else will happen in the bathroom. I can't imagine Hermione being completely submissive for long...Just long enough to get what she wants lol. It'll be interesting to see how it's dealt with. I can only imagine how creative Riddle can be and trust me when I say I've been tempted to see just how creative I can make him myself hahaha. But...that's another can of worms all together. I look forward to reading your next update and seeing how it goes..( Side note I almost thought you were going to have Harry see Hermione...'service' Tom or vice versa just out of spite on Tom's part XD...Dear god...can you imagne THAT confrontation?! -snickers- )
person Blacklabyrinth8
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First things first I debated a while on receiwing simply because I'm afraid I'll make an ass out of myself...lol...I just simply ADORE this fic. I read it all in about 2 days and then I keep going back to some of my favorite parts ( three guess as to what those are ;P )and rereading them. I'm just all aquiver and full of anticipation for the next chapter.

The potions store room scene had me wishing for more dirty talk and possibly a bit more bondage ( just how I am and if it doesn't make it in then there's no worries, not everyone is into the same extremes as others and I'd still read it and not feel dissappointed or anything ) Anyway. Again, I love, love, love, LOVE this fic. You're a great writer and I cannot wait for the next update =) Till then, take care hehe.
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First, I'm very sorry I haven't been reviewing, I was just so busy all the time.
Second, great chapter ! And all others I have missed. I was just a little bit dissapointed since Tom and Hermione didn't rush in eachother's arms the minute they were back together XD
And I hope Ginny teaches Harry a good lesson, and to get rid of the annoying woman as fast as possible. She isn't pretty, is she?
I will try to keep up with this story from now on, and please, I've really been missing juicy parts in last few chapters, so could you please add some ? *puppy eyes look*
And I do admire you for keeping it on for that long (I mean, 39 chapters is pretty long ^^) and I sure hope for more :D
person Tourniquette
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Another chapter. I'm so glad this wasn't going to be a Sleepless in Seattle Germany Trip. I HATED that movie. Onscreen TOGETHER, lovers! Yeah.

It's interesting that Ginny is the one here who cannot control her emotions as opposed to Hermione (take THAT, JKR! LOL), not even enough to save their hostess from the bedbugs on the face. Heh.

Bad news for old Dumbly, though! What did he do, fall into a hole? Man's getting senile; let's put him in a hole!

I'm so braindead today, but it was good for me. :D
person Rena
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say I think I'm going to love Germay! Though I feel a bit sorry for the boys as Ginny's rage can be horrifying! Though really they deserve it! Though of course with another great chapter comes more questions such as where is Dumbledore?! And what's happened to Grindlewald? My thepry is that they have gone off together and are in some sort of wonderful place in a far off land...yeah that's got to be it! *giggles*
As for Harry killing off Tom in CoS I couldn't agree more. Maybe that's why I'm taking solong to re-read the first one cause I don't want to get to the second when Harry kills Tom. (I'm re-reading the whole series while I wait for the first part of the 7th movie to come out, I can't wait!!) Too bad Harry killed him though I wouldn't mind a (as you so nicely put it) young, hot, drool-worthy, evil Dark Lord walking the Earth for the next five books. Lol though I have a question for you which actor do you prefer playing Tom? Christian Coulson in the second movie or Frank Dillane in the sixth?
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Rena
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm anxious to know what happened to Dumbledore and Grindelwald. And I hope Hermione will somehow take revenge for the woman who was sitting on Tom's lap;). I love how she's possessive of him and I think he loves it too, as long as she takes revenge on the girls, like with Iris, and not on him that is.

Another great aspect is the way you make other characters (Draco, Abraxas, Gareth,...) interesting too. In some fics I scroll through everything that's not strictly Hermione and Tom, yet with yours I'm actually interested in their lives:).

I also wondered who you imagine as Tom? I always see him as Christian Coulson in COS, I think he was aboslutely perfect as Tom: extremely handsome/attractive, yet he also has that evil vibe.

I also like the difference you pointed ou between Hermione and Tom's intelligence: Hermione is in certain aspects as intelligent as he is, yet she seems to study more for the same grades as Tom.

Oh, and another idea I'd like to see is a scene where Hermione's a bit drunk, which makes her say some intimite things to Tom. Of course Tom's not getting drunk (not exactly his style).

I don't know if you plan to explain how he got his snake like appeareance. Personnally I like it better when it's just some kind of transfiguration to scare his enemies and be feared, and in private he looks like Tom:). But then again I don't know if you plan a meeting between the future Dark Lord and Tom...

Anyway, thanks for writing!