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for Somewhere in Time

by serpentinred

person Fleur K.
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For some reason AFF didn't post my whole review......wtf. I should have known something was up when my captcha was "ready repsepis" I mean.....seriously. So here it is again..... }:[ (face of frustration) GAH! Another cliffy! This one is even worse than the last. I do hope this review some how grants you excessive time in your life to write the next chapter.....or the next 10 chapters......<_< I really cannot wait to see where you go with this.....my curiosity is piqued! So.....you are updating tomorrow, right? Awesome. :D (By the way.....I am supposed to be reading 100 pages of Freud right now, so thanks for giving me an excuse to procrastinate......definitely worth it)
person Fleur K.
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O_O IT STILL DIDN'T....okay...last time I promise. This is the missing part. "I really cannot wait to see where you go with this.....my curiosity is piqued! So, you are updating tomorrow, right? Awesome. :D (By the way.....I am supposed to be reading 100 pages of Freud right now, so thanks for giving me an excuse to procrastinate. Definitely worth it!)
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aaargh.. I love this story. and every time you post a new chapter I'm overjoyed and simultaneously saddened because it means I'll have to wait for the next one. I know that I need to be a more patient person.. all good things come in time and so on.. but its so hard with writing as good as yours. I look forward to your updates.
This chapter was awesome from start to finish..
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah, you can't do that. Evil Cliff hangers. I love this story. Keep up the good work <3
person janasi83
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! Another chapter! Number 43 and this is still the best story I've ever read on AFF! How do you do it??
Would love to go into more detail but can't because I'm so sleep deprived I can't think straight. Just wanted to say thank you for the quick update!
person janasi83
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And not just flying tomatoes, it's flying ROTTEN tomatoes for you!!!

Still, thank you very, very much for this Christmas special, it's a witty and also touching interlude. They will have to part someday I guess, huh? Or can Hermione stay in the past and make a new future (pretty please)? LOL Though truth to tell, I'd actually prefer a bitter-sweet ending for once, while happy ends give you great immediate satisfaction, you forget about the whole story rather quickly. Whereas an undesired ending...well, let's just say I'm still mad at the creators of Death Note that they made Yagami Light lose and die...and I watched the anime 2 months ago. Or an open ending would be nice, too... gosh, I really should write my own fic and stop badgering other authors. Sorry! :)

As always, anxiously waiting for more...
person Fleur K.
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Christmas present! I honestly read the part in which Dream!Tom calls Hagrid "Dad!" about five times, while repeating "wtf" to myself. The bit about McGonagall proclaiming that she will kill everyone, while wearing fuzzy slippers and a flowery cape was.....pretty much priceless. I'm sad to say I do not have any noteworthy captchas today *sigh* In regards to the bomb killing the trolls....the wizards would have totally had time to do a shield spell......yeah.....ahem.

Yes.....I am most definitely finished with finals....what a hellish ordeal that would have been if it had not been the case! I hope you do update prior to New Year's (the one on the 31st!)
person Mekom
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This chapter made me happy. What a wonderful Christmas present! Although I do believe that Hermione may need to avoid eggnog in the future, because the liquor was definitely messing with her dreams. I wonder how Hermione's dad would actually react to Tom. I bet Hermione's dad wouldn't be too thrilled with any boy dating his precious only daughter.

Hope you have a Merry Christmas!
person omgfabulous
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*FLAILS* this is definitely in my top 3 favorite tom/hermione fics... if not, my FAVORITE fic guhhhhhhhh i love you
person Tourniquette
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a cliffhanger!

IDK if I would care about using dark magic in front of a stranger if I were Tom and I knew I could Obliviate him later. Then again, I might just kill him later instead and save myself the trouble of explaining how a wizard lost to trolls ended up with a memory charm when trolls can't cast hexes. O.o

So, how long was the wait between when Tom slammed Hermione into the door for the second time and when she finally opened the door to her friends? LOL.

I love action sequences, although it's frustrating not knowing if Dumbledore or Riddle saved the day in this instance. The troll cave reminded me of a scene from the film The Ghost in the Darkness about man-eating lions. I'm eager to discover what Riddle's plans are for Hermione and the others once they return to Hogwarts!