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Yaaaay!! Another chapter! You made me so incredibly happy, thank you!!!

You are right, usually even a crappy ending is better than no ending. Looking forward to the rest of the fic ... and any others you might choose to write/finish.

I'm so happy this story was updated!!!!!! I'm seriously happy, I love reading this story so much. Ive read so many tom/hermione fics and I think this is one of the best (if not THE best) ones out there. As always, the chapter was begautifully written and that opening dream scene had me cracking up, especially the wedding invitations part. I can't wait until the next update, keep doing your thing! ^^

I had the feeling that the increasing intricacy of the plot (the insanely multiple time travels) will make the writer abadon the fic. :( Which is such a shame...

Serpent, do you plan on ever returning to this fic? Perhaps you could simplify the plot and be done in a few more chapters? More isn't always more, sometimes it's less.

I wouldn't even be asking except you are such a talented writer and your stories have a way of coming alive within the reader. After all this time, I'm still very much involved with your characters. Oh well, I guess an unfinished story is the one you remember most, so that's not bad. But towards the end the plot line has become so complex that it doesn't even work as an open ending which the reader can imagine themself and which can sometimes be a good alternative to the more conventional ending.

This is seriously the best story ever. I've read many, many stories and this is the most memorable. I've read it three times in the course of five months just because I love this story so much, even though it takes me ages to finish since there's so many chapters. But this is seriously my favorite story of all time and I do hope that you continue. You have a gift with words!!

I love this story. I went back and reread it from the beginning, because I was a few chapters behind due to life getting in the way. You are one of my favorite writers. You do an excellent job with character development. I love your possessive Tom. I was cheering on Ginny in the scene where she was ranting at Dumbledore for all the horrible things that he did in their original time.

I am really curious to find out what is going to happen now that Hermione is back, and Tom has taken over. I hope that you get a chance to update soon. It would be a nice present before I begin vet school, and won't be able to surface until December. *looks hopeful*

Lovely writer of this fanfiction.. I AM DYING HERE. Not really, but I really enjoy your story and I keep checking for updates, but it's been ages! I understand if you're busy with work or school or something, but please please do not neglect this story! At least give me a sign that you're still alive and planning to write more :) I love your Tom.. He is purrfect ;)
Love and hugs from a Norwegian fan girl :D

Another great 2 chapters. The one before this had me wondering lol. Excited to see where you take this!

Oh my god. The troll chapter totally got me. I was horrified. Needless to say, I'm relieved that wasn't real! Your new chapter is great. I do so love feisty Hermione. I look forward to reading more soon!

This is such an amazing story, and once I started reading it, it was almost impossible for me to stop. When I started reading it I thought it was going to be "Hermione goes back in time, meets Riddle they fall in love one of them has a drastic change in personality and they all live together with no problems". I adore that Riddle is dangerous and Hermione has kept her basic structure and moral standing. I enjoy the timeline shifts as well and the way you had their memories intermingle. Hermione's constant denial about Tom can be a bit annoying but it is understandable given the story line, plus if she was just constantly accepting of the situation it would be just as annoying. Anyways, I love the story and character development so far and look forward to more in the future.

Best birthday present ever