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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness gracious.
*facepalm*
Tom, y u no learn?
Ah well, hopefully Hermione will make it all better in more ways than one AND this new Tom will. . . . Be slightly more pleasant. *snort* Yeah right, I take that back. I hope he continues on with Voldemort's silent reign of terror with the reluctant Hermione. :D
*facepalm*
Tom, y u no learn?
Ah well, hopefully Hermione will make it all better in more ways than one AND this new Tom will. . . . Be slightly more pleasant. *snort* Yeah right, I take that back. I hope he continues on with Voldemort's silent reign of terror with the reluctant Hermione. :D
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow! did not see that coming!
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooo good!!!! AH!!! I'm so glad you updated! ^.^
And, well. . .:3 I love it!
I can't wait for the next one!
And, well. . .:3 I love it!
I can't wait for the next one!
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved! Although I must admit, I'm not sure I'm still following everything.. It got a little too confusing in between there... Maybe it will all clear up in the next chap :)
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooookay. Haha. Well, first I thought that it was a bit much tell than show in the begining of the chapter, but then when I read the last of the chapter, I realised that to actually hear Voldemort's and Hermione's argument would be quite unnecessary since it wouldn't matter since they are know going back to the past again. I wonder what time they will end up in... hm... his school-time again or later? It would be interesting if they appeared later. Tihi. But baaah, boring that Harry, Ginny and Draco have to tag along again. They are only getting in the way of all the smut between Hermione and Tom!
HA! I knew it was Voldemort who sent them back in time. It will be interesting to find out how he did it, though. Very interesting indeed.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Toodles.
HA! I knew it was Voldemort who sent them back in time. It will be interesting to find out how he did it, though. Very interesting indeed.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Toodles.
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July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've already reviewed this chapter over at ff.net, but it occurred to me yesterday who Prof. Riddle must be: Could he be a Horcrux? Hmm? Hmm? ::grins widely:: Well, anyhow, I eagerly await chapter 50 to see you prove me wrong (because you're amazing like that)!
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! I've been waiting on Tom's pov. I really dislike that the majority of this story is from Hermione's pov. It would be different if the story was in first person but it's not. Anyhow, this was definitely the best chapter. It was very intense and I loved that Tom killed Salazar for taking away his girl. I love jealous and possessive Tom.
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I didn't see the change in time happening. I knew it would change, but I surely didn't believe that that would be the outcome.
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June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!!! *squeaks and falls off her chair, in a dead faint*
The last line of your chapter was a strategic move of epic proportions, Serpent! I applaud your cunning mind, darling... it seems like you would have felt right at home among your fellow Slytherins! (squints her eyes and sees Nerys and Ms Velvela among the green-clad gang as well). Evil cliffies is a must, of course! And my pulse is literally raising like a niffler on crack with the anticipation of what your next chapter shall contain! :D
What is more, the interaction between your characters was as entertaining and engaging as always! It looks like Ron is an utter moron no matter what timeline is concerned. Is it very, very evil of me to enjoy seeing him change colours like a demented chameleon in misery during his interaction with Tom? Nah... *scoffs at the absurdity of the idea* And it's quite entertaining to know that no one in the present timeline seems to know who Voldemort was before taking up the mantle of the Dark Lord... Weaslebee (I adore Draco's mocking tongue at times) has really put his foot into his own mouth, hasn't he? *cackles in sheer delight*
Basically, I can go on and on how amazing yet another update of your was... and the addition of Nefertiti's tomb was a nice addition! Looking forward to your update with held breath!!! (And I am also awaiting some Voldemort/Hermione interaction as well! I cannot wait to see how she shall handle the new body of her lover... *blushes prettily*)
P.S: I also had the chance to read your own review on my the Rise of the Dark Age story... oh, Serpent... I was on the verge of bursting into tears when I saw that two of my stories were gone! Technical errors are a real bitch, let me tell you that *pouts in unfairness* However, I changed my password and feverently hope that nothing like that will happen again. The 5th chapter is slowly but surely progressing forwards now until I am assured that everything is as perfect as I could get it (that's the mini-Hermione within me forcing me to do it!) :) And some Voldemort/Hermione interaction is on its way as well... hehe! XD
The last line of your chapter was a strategic move of epic proportions, Serpent! I applaud your cunning mind, darling... it seems like you would have felt right at home among your fellow Slytherins! (squints her eyes and sees Nerys and Ms Velvela among the green-clad gang as well). Evil cliffies is a must, of course! And my pulse is literally raising like a niffler on crack with the anticipation of what your next chapter shall contain! :D
What is more, the interaction between your characters was as entertaining and engaging as always! It looks like Ron is an utter moron no matter what timeline is concerned. Is it very, very evil of me to enjoy seeing him change colours like a demented chameleon in misery during his interaction with Tom? Nah... *scoffs at the absurdity of the idea* And it's quite entertaining to know that no one in the present timeline seems to know who Voldemort was before taking up the mantle of the Dark Lord... Weaslebee (I adore Draco's mocking tongue at times) has really put his foot into his own mouth, hasn't he? *cackles in sheer delight*
Basically, I can go on and on how amazing yet another update of your was... and the addition of Nefertiti's tomb was a nice addition! Looking forward to your update with held breath!!! (And I am also awaiting some Voldemort/Hermione interaction as well! I cannot wait to see how she shall handle the new body of her lover... *blushes prettily*)
P.S: I also had the chance to read your own review on my the Rise of the Dark Age story... oh, Serpent... I was on the verge of bursting into tears when I saw that two of my stories were gone! Technical errors are a real bitch, let me tell you that *pouts in unfairness* However, I changed my password and feverently hope that nothing like that will happen again. The 5th chapter is slowly but surely progressing forwards now until I am assured that everything is as perfect as I could get it (that's the mini-Hermione within me forcing me to do it!) :) And some Voldemort/Hermione interaction is on its way as well... hehe! XD
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, loved the new chapter :D