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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absofuckinglutely love your portration of Tom. It`s definitely the best one I`ve ever read!
You make him so irresistible, that I just wanna take him and yeah keep him!!
I really hope you update soon, can`t wait to find out what
You make him so irresistible, that I just wanna take him and yeah keep him!!
I really hope you update soon, can`t wait to find out what
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January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, very detailed with long chapters and credible plotline. Although prefering Voldemort rather than Tom, this little pearl seems interesing enough to get me hooked. Goos job.
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I love this chapter. Favorite chapter poor Harry and them.
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the last few chapters have been amazing as we've seen more of how much Tom cares about Hermione (although in a non-fluffy way of course). It seems like he is sometimes on the edge of being quite tender with her before she physically attacks him for something. I can't wait to see their relationship develop further. And it was hilarious to have the others hear some of their doings. I love Draco's character and his commentary. Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I ABSOLUTELY love your story. Love the way you portray Tom. So evil, yet so desirable.
Hope you update soon!!
Hope you update soon!!
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November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ginny, Harry, and Draco....least Hermione and Riddle are having fun..til he decided to be sneaky at the end ;)
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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are very lucky I am reviewing this, considering there are 10,000 things I should be doing instead of reading these fics.
About the smut scene: \o/ Oh yeah!
That's all I have to say about that, really.
As for the more serious part, loved the Tom/Grindewald interaction. The atmosphere was really nice, and it's good it didn't end into a full out battle.
That would have killed the tension.
As for Harry, he is just like an ostrich."Will he hurt her?". If he could stick his head out of the hole he put it in, he would realise that him hurting her is not the greatest concern.
I really like how you portray Draco, he is in the better side of canon. I know he is not brave or very noble in the books, but I do think he deserves better.
If I had one comment to make, it would be about the Draco, Harry, Ginny scene. I really enjoyed it, but I generally don't like it when authors go back in time, unless it's for some big reveal that requires a flash-back. Here, I feel you could have made them discuss it the next morning, after suffering through the whole night. It doesn't change much, but to me it just makes it seem more as if the story is advancing. In the end, it's not a big deal, but it is one thing I would change.
Still, a good chapter once again.
About the smut scene: \o/ Oh yeah!
That's all I have to say about that, really.
As for the more serious part, loved the Tom/Grindewald interaction. The atmosphere was really nice, and it's good it didn't end into a full out battle.
That would have killed the tension.
As for Harry, he is just like an ostrich."Will he hurt her?". If he could stick his head out of the hole he put it in, he would realise that him hurting her is not the greatest concern.
I really like how you portray Draco, he is in the better side of canon. I know he is not brave or very noble in the books, but I do think he deserves better.
If I had one comment to make, it would be about the Draco, Harry, Ginny scene. I really enjoyed it, but I generally don't like it when authors go back in time, unless it's for some big reveal that requires a flash-back. Here, I feel you could have made them discuss it the next morning, after suffering through the whole night. It doesn't change much, but to me it just makes it seem more as if the story is advancing. In the end, it's not a big deal, but it is one thing I would change.
Still, a good chapter once again.
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have an information about Tom's name:
Tom Marvolo Riddle contains the words: Milord, Dildo, Lie, Liar, Immortal, Retard, Mad, Vile, Dammit, Doomed, Moodier, Riot, O Dear, Adored, Admired, Dead, Alive, Alter, Dare, Laid, Moral *cough* *cough*, Oral, Rival, Tall, Violator and MORDRED!!
Many of these actually fits him xD LOL
Not to be too off topic, here is yours:
Serpent In Red: Desire, Nerd, Sinner, Pet, Pretender and Siren :D
Hope you enjoyed these :D
Tom Marvolo Riddle contains the words: Milord, Dildo, Lie, Liar, Immortal, Retard, Mad, Vile, Dammit, Doomed, Moodier, Riot, O Dear, Adored, Admired, Dead, Alive, Alter, Dare, Laid, Moral *cough* *cough*, Oral, Rival, Tall, Violator and MORDRED!!
Many of these actually fits him xD LOL
Not to be too off topic, here is yours:
Serpent In Red: Desire, Nerd, Sinner, Pet, Pretender and Siren :D
Hope you enjoyed these :D
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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes I did find this chapter VERY enjoyable. Wow. Tom is probably the sexiest man ever. How sneaky of him to get into her mind when she was at her most vulnerable, not that that kind of behavior is particularly surprising ;) Anyway, excellent chapter! I can't wait to find out what he sees when looking through her mind. I wonder if she will be in more trouble, and not the sexy kind. (Not that there is a problem with the sexy kind. Feel free to add more of that :P )