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What happened to the original somewhere in time where u showed the sex scenes

So, this is the fifth time I've read this story now...I think it's very telling of how amazing this story is! I also just realized that I keep signing the reviews under different names soooo yea, just wanted to let you know that I adore this story--it's my absolute favorite. I am curious as to where all the lemons disappeared off to! It's not on FFnet, adultfanfiction, or AO3 :( this story is brilliant, of course, but I miss the lemons since they were so well-written as well. Please let me know if they are still around!

Oh my gosh! This story is the best! I really really really enjoyed just everything about it! I loved Draco especially! So hilarious! The romance between Tom and Hermione was also totally realistic! I could definitely see Tom behaving the way he did and Hermione reacting the ways she did! You are such a wonderful writer and the author of what is most likely my favorite Tomione fic! Thank you so much for writing it!

I just have a little issue though! I've read this story a couple of times now and it seems like there are parts missing from it! What happened to all the...you know...sexy times?

I really enjoyed those parts of the story and not in a creepy way! I just really liked how they revealed plot points and gave me deeper glimpses into the minds of the characters!

Has something happened to the site? Or is it just me that can't see the missing parts?

Anyways, I just wanted to leave my first ever review of any piece of work! I hope you realize that I really adore this piece and that I'm so grateful you chose to share your wonderful writing with us! I hope you keep writing and that you continue being as awesome a storyteller!

My eternal gratitude to you, SerpentInRed!

Love forever,
Pattycake

I miss my lemons.... and I don't read hetero very often so that says something....

I absolutely love this fanfic, I've read the entirety of it twice and I just think the complexity of Tom and Hermione is amazing and the plot is so well thought out. Just a quick query though, I was flicking through chapters and I swear some smutty stuff has been edited out very recently? Like when they are in Salazar's cabin and Tom and Hermione share a room, scenes like that. I may be going mad, but I swear they were much more graphic than they are now and they must have been edited very recently because I only read it a couple of months ago with a hell of a lot more smut!

I'm so upset! Why did u take the lemons out of your story?! *sobs* do u have that version up anywhere else or send it to me ?

I believe this is the fourth time this year that I've found myself reading your story. I believe that really does say something about your writing prowess! This is my absolute favorite story and I hope I can read more stories from you--I am in love with your writing

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Hermione was amazing and Tom remained true to him. Truly wonderful!

I need more!!! This was so we done. Please one and this is what happens later!!!!

Ok 2 things.

1...I've been following this story for a while. .love it. Absolutely. Fantastic story.
2...I don't know what I missed...but who sent them back in the original timeline? Did I miss a hint?