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Holy cats, this was wild. Nicely done!

This really brilliant writing! It's not a easy subject to broach or describe, but you do so clearly and elegantly, as with all of your writing. What I like most about it is that you move past the act to the inner working dynamics between Lucius (who barely says a word), and Narcissa. I love how you get in her head! All of her emotions are very palable and understandably complex. Although the dog is the one mounting her, ultimately, this is about her submission to Lucius and that's both terrifying and beautiful. Thank you for sharing such a brave and powerful piece of writing.

Agreed - this is a terrifying story. The whole time I was so unsure of what was going to happen - torn between a form of arousal and horror. What an interesting take on Lucius and Narcissa. It's definitely refreshing and fascinating to read a story where he is - truly - a terrifying person.