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Unless she's suffering from Stockholm Syndrome, I haven't read anywhere in this story where he has done anything to make her fall in love with him. Also, why is it always Hermione? You never get a real sense of any feelings from Tom. Yes, she's a possession to him; however, his most intimate feeling about her or even his new looks haven't been explored. At the moment this story is very much on the surface and lacks the depth that could make it great.

A fantastic original plot.

Oohhhhh! This story is such a pleasant discovery! *drools* An evil, charming, twisted Lord Voldemort... If I ever had a halo, I think it just broke into a million pieces. Ha!
Will this story be continued by any chance? I so cannot wait to read more :) You have turned me into a fan, lady! *goofy grin* And thanks to you and Nerys, I will have my own updated chapter of Hermione/Voldemort story by the end of this week *squee* (btw, if you are by any chance interested, it is called The Rise of the Dark Age, here on Aff.net... Just in case ;) )
Looking forward to possible continuation!

you have no idea how much i'm enjoying this story *_______*

Well wonderful chapter as usual, although I can't believe you left it hanging like that!! Oh I just want to see Hermione make a fool of herself in front of the Order, oh he's going to have sex with her in front of them, isn't he? Omg cannot wait, poor Hermione, the situations we put her in. lol. So you said two lemons in your message to me, but there was only one . . oh yeah, and how did I inspire this? Not that I'm complaining, mind ; )

You know what is kind of amusing about this fic and SIT? in SIT it is hermione who is totally ignorant of her feelings for tom and in this...well after your last chapter it is really obvious that voldemort does not get how important he is to her...

i mean sure she helped those guy but she did stand by HIS side ultimatively...ahhh it is so frustrating

this fic is so dark and riddle is so EVIL. I'm lovin it!!!!!

god...you don't know how bad i want to know how it goes on...i mean we can all take a clever guess what he'll want to do to her next...so ahhhh cannot wait!!!!

Excellent chapter. What will Hg do now? Three days is a long time to be under the influence of a lust potion.

Keep up the fantastic work, and please update soon.

love Sonia :)

So very dark and wonderful, I first found your stories on FF.net and stalked you over to here. I am a HUGE vold/herm fan and you really wrote them out wonderfully. Can't wait for more.

Yummy! Such a deliciously evil smutty chapter. I love it. I've read it so many times already and thought I already reviewed, but imagine my surprise when I hadn't. Will correct that blatant inexcusable error, right now.

"He extended his arm and curled his index finger, beckoning her to go over silently." - swoons. It's the little things that make him so droolworthy. Like this.

"Shall I assume that you've lost your cleverness in our little trip? Or have I simply overestimated your intelligence?" he asked mockingly. He tapped his hand on the armrest, and a few seconds passed before he spoke again, a vicious smile on his lips. "Since you've lost the ability to comprehend simple signals, come over here, Mudblood. I want you in front of me." - Should I get out my Hermione voodoo doll already? I think I must. Love his mocking and him speaking down to her like that. XD

*snnrkks* Oh my, he's really letting her have it, isn't he? Making her crawl to him, and then, making the floor so slippery that she can't even do that. *snnrkkss* That really was a wonderful image in my mind: Hermione the seal. And his "how clumsy of you" ... LOLs.

"I will be most grateful," she answered, gritting her teeth even harder and clenching her hands. - Hermione's self-restraint is amazing me. LOL.

sighs. I so love the part where he makes Hermione pleasure him. LOL. You're really getting it across to the reader how much Hermione feels uncomfortable and humiliated, and how much he's taking pleasure in taunting her, making it even worse with every move, gesture or spoken word.

"A very vivid image of people roasting pigs above an open fire" - well, that puts a mental image in my head as well. LOL. Ah, interesting potions. Always knew that subject was more usefull than Snape let everyone to believe. XD

""Is your excitement because of the ... supposed control you have over me? To think that you had the upper hand?" Slowly, he slipped a single digit into her and started to rotate his wrist with just enough pressure so that he was touching every part of her, but not enough to satisfy her. "Or is it because you actually enjoy being submissive?"" - seeing she has no control, I'd say the latter. LOL. But eh... if Lord Daftness doesn't pick up on that, I can't be held...AHHHH!

"he asked gently, almost like a man questioning the woman he loved.

But Hermione knew that he was not being sincere. His eyes were still like gems, gleaming with a hard cruelty and emitting coldness." - And I like how you keep him I.C. He's still the evil sob we love.

And Hermione is still the tough gryffindor that we know and love too. She doesn't become some sobbing wench when he cuts and burns her, but bites away the pain. "The look of agony must have been enough for him even though she managed to not utter a sound because he stopped before he spoke again." - Interesting that he stopped though. One does wonder why. He's sadistic enough to enjoy another's pain, so could it be that he does harbour some feelings towards her?

"Once the potion makes its way into your system, you'll feel an uncontrollable need for the person you"

BRILLIANCE!!!!!!
Oh.. the next chapter is going to be even more horribly wonderful when hermione has to stand before her former allies in this state. You are the greatest..most devious..
gold star to you for delicious cruelty!