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please continue writing this chapter I loved it

I didnt really like the part bout the girls having to be submissive, to me it felt old fashioned, even for the wizerding world. Other then that it was ok

very nice! please post more

Awesome story! Plz update!

Love the premise! Please update

Poor Ginny. One thing I feel I really should point out, though, is that to the British, fanny doesn't mean butt; it means a vagina. That's why they call it a bum, and why they are shocked when they hear Americans call it a fanny pack. The point is, Mr. Weasly wouldn't use 'fanny' he would say 'tan your bum'

I like your story alot! I think it has a good start for a BDSM plotline with Ginny and Harry. Maybe since Arthur is starting to take Ginny in hand it can build Harry's interest in the dominant role with punishment.I think it would be interesting to put in a confused Ginny about the pleasure of the punishment, of having the disobeidience handled (that kind of thing), instead of resisting so much she starts to encourage it. I'm sure you have a story mapped out already though :). I'm looking forward to more chapters which is different for me because I don't usually don't like Harry/Ginny but your story is turning out to be very interesting and you've only written 2 chapters! I'm awaiting more chapters eagerly :)

Really like this story so far. Looking forward to see Ginny punished more and seeing Harry punish Ginny.

No it wasn't fair. if that happened in real life the kid would be taken away for child abuse. Lets face it even when he knew he was hurting her, and MARKING her he continued for what?? he wanted to break her spirit? have her submit??