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dang it! he was marked but at least kept the plot going and it's still interesting. did draco honestly think he could win with harry. i have a feeling both may get what they want. harry freedom from the mark and draco getting harry to stay willingly. this was definetly the type of dessert that finishes the meal but has you coming back for more. already looking forward to the sequel. let the games continue and the plot thicken. viva la vida!

Well, I was anxiously waiting for this chapter, and you didn't disappoint! I was sympathizing and rooting for Harry until the very end; his crumbling hopes were like mine, that's how powerful your characterizations are. I'm going to be stubborn and say I hate Malfoy right now, because I was hoping for a happy ending, even though I shouldn't expect/prefer realistic/sensible endings, and that I will probably sympathize with Malfoy within the next sequels.

I thought the first chapter's dark/dry humor was excellent; the second chapter, adrenaline-fueled; and the third chapter, just plain emotion-wrenching. Love, love, love this story, and can't wait for the sequels :).

wow! love Dark Draco *evil grin*
wondering why he chose the fox as the mark :P
pls update soon!
*happy reader*

Wow, loving this new story so, so much.

Thanks for writing!!!

*waits eagerly for another update* Very good! I love the unique way you go about this story.

i'm really enjoying your story - and will definitely be checking back with aff daily for updates. keep it up!

.....gah! this installment was so much fun and if the previous chapter was an appetizer then this was the full course. honestly reading through this cleared up questions i might have asked and issues i had previously had. i would have lost respect for draco as the "villain" if he was only truly strong because of those bracelets. i do applaud him for not letting greed get in the way of gaining that magic. most would make juvenile mistakes that would get them caught but his method is very good. i did lose some respect for him powerwise because he marked the others and i think a truly powerful being would get people too follow them because of their true character. u know those leaders that people can't help but follow but i also understand his reasoning for why and so well... i'm conflicted. anyways this was just so exquisite. til next time! viva la vida loca!

you're very welcome!!! I'm enjoying this so much!!!

oooo, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh man! This story is action-packed!!! :-D

How long have you been cooking this one up?

I like this Draco, I think dark is a misleading word, more like
manipulative,with a slight lean towards sinister, is best to describe him.

That and the fact, Draco is a good fighter. Where did he learn it and
does he have qualities of a fox or something?

Oh, and Harry isn't half bad either. ;-)