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for Kept

by Kadiprince

schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're not going to leave it there?! Lol. Titillating to the extreme. Now I can't wait to see how all the characters come together and the story unfolds. :)
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh....nice. I like this. You're gonna make me write an AU one day. Love the characterization of Blaise's infatuation with his best friend and the obvious obsession that's going on with the roommates for Harry. Love angst and obsession...two great combos in my book. Looking forward to more!
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad there's a second chapter up. I thought that was one of those stories already abandoned at the first chapter. Since I love AU fics revolving around the mob and minx!Harry I really wanted to read more, and I'm not disappointed. I love nightclub scenes and yours is really great, well descripted: you can feel the atmosphere, the sensuality of it. And love love love the sexy Harry who drives all the boys mad, and the possessive Tom. Cant' wait to read the next chapter!
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far, very exciting!
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking sooo too!! Chapter 3 please!!!!
person caroll
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg !!!!I luuuuve this. Please update soon!
person ulla
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooohh! I love, love, love it! I can't even imagine what it would be like living in such close quarters with such gorgeousness. I like how you've written Draco, and how while he still feels some ties to his mother he can't sacrifice everything for family alone - but freedom comes at cost.

Poor Harry - I don't know what Tom is up to, but I know it can't be good. I know it isn't in your warnings but there isn't any character death, right? I have to ask.

Anyway, please keep right on writing. I love your story. I wish they had story alerts here like they do on ff.net, but I will add this to my bookmarks and check back periodically. Oh! And Blaise's jealousy was perfect, not wanting to share his lovely Draco with anyone. Haha!

schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay dearie, It's time for an update. This story is looking good.
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 2!!! Harry, Ron, Blaise, Cedric and Oliver live together? Interesting!!!
person Lilyyuri
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, can't wait for more!