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for Bleared Perspective (Cherry)

by Lunarsempai

person milapink
schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I fell in love hirst
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow its been ages. wb. poor harry just keeps getting more and more confused.
person slytherin-slut
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I thought draco was a bit out of character in the beginning but shocked the heck out of me when he asked harry to bond. I'm interested in his reasoning and curious to the stranger. So far your story is good despite what a certain snape told me ;)
person grandma
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm finally finished it and I like it so far. Some parts get a bit confusing and ur grammar is atrocious but otherwise its great and I love it.
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would be happy to edit for you. There are many grammatical and spelling errors, not to be judgmental, but I think it could help if you had someone willing to edit. Send an email to me @ theblogcobbler@gmail.com
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-waits to see what happens....

~eros
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting story. deffinately a unique one, or at least i haven't read a story similar to it. quite a few spelling/grammar issues, but i'm assuming english isn't your first language too, so overall it's pretty good. keep up the good work :)
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 please!!! Soooo need more!!!
person Layla
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story and I find it very interesting. I have to admit that I am very curious to see what will happen. I wonder what Harry's family will think of this new development. If Harry is a demon like it is being suggested I am curious why no one else would know about this demon blood in Harry. I do hope the little voice in Harry's head helps him with this. Please continue when you can.
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting...... i really hope you eventually explain the japan versions of the malfoys unlike most people do...
i like it so far though...


~Eros