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by K8BNimble

person Ace21
schedule April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What would easter be without peeps? lol, only every easter ever I experienced. I had no idea what a "peep"was and I had to google it to find out. Really hot story but why in the world would a group of english people have american muggle candies? It would have been so easy to do a wizarding variant...oh well, good smut anyway :P
person The Pink Fuzzy Elephant
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That is an interesting story!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How'd you do? Very well. Nice storyline. For once I don't mind that it was kinda rollplaying that we didn't know about til the end coz I was really liked the way it went. (Not that I don't like Harry being roughed up, but he deserves a little love.) Would love to see a sequel that somehow lets Harry and Draco be, well, not together, but have some good times not with the whole group and where Sev doesn't get too jealous. And would love to see a sequel where Lucius is given a bit of reign (when Harry isn't completely exhausted) to explore the fact that Harry found the pain "surprisingly arousing" Didn't really like Nott/Pansy, as in, well, Lucius will always play the villain more and they were just pointlessly mean. So, yeah, wouldn't mind if they didn't make a reappearance. But yes, hope theres MORE :)
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh. Yummy. Love Lucius getting at Harry's balls. I only wish he'd gone on for longer. A bit squicked by all the het, but thats okay. Like the bits where Snape's nicer (lol, despite liking the nastiest bits equally as much :P)