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for Heart of Lies

by bored137654

person Lovely
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and the way you write. It is so brilliant. I love it. This is brilliant!
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story...i cant wait for more
person pat
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great work :) i like em a it longer but u're the autor :P keep it up;>
person Illyania
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amaaaaazing! When are you updating? It isn't abandoned right? This was amaaaazing. Ooops I think I've said that already. ^^; Amaaaazing. Update
person Gay
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God story start. I really liked it. I hope to see nore soon.
person Barbie
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Utter brilliance, if I may say so myself! I love Severitus stories! And Harry being Voldemort's son and heir as well is just icing on this glorious cake! And then you go and add Fenrir as his mate...I'll take twenty anytime any day!
person Elvira
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH! You really should update sooon! Loved it with all my heart!

PLEASE!
person beyond
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i really loved it
update soon please i need more
person Carranya
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant! I hope you're not planning to abandon this? I would hate you if you did!
person Ann10550
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please continue