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for Heart of Lies

by bored137654

person jahasshna
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
gr8 1 ch
i need to see mre
person hpfgluvr
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter.

The prologue was really good too.

I liked it a lot
person kunitsu
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh its getting more exciting. I wonder what Lily wrote to Harry.
person Nika
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG AWESOMESAUCE!
person Gwenna
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter as well. Quite the suspense at the end, but you promised to deal with that in the next chapter. UPDATE SOON! :)
person klam
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
brill work
person Barbie
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really an awesome follow up on that prologue. Fenrir's story was really good and interesting. I can't wait to see more of this! I would love to get on the mail list!
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWSME CH!
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good ch
person Marcus
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT WORK! IT IS SO AWESOME AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH! GIVE ME MORE! CAPS LOCK IS AWESOME TOO BUT THIS IS BETTER!