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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Not enough Harry/Pansy stuff out there.
Have you ever read 'The soft breaking of Harry Potter'? It's rather hot. It's got some real nice kinks in it, you should put some of them in here.
You mentioned Harry being jealous of Dean kissing Ginny. I hope it's because he wanted to be like that with Pansy and not because he wanted Ginny in any way. That, or he mentions feeling like that around Ginny to Pansy and she recognises it as the symptoms of a love potion. Stupid Ginny. Should have been eaten by the Basilisk.
Yeah, put some kinky stuff in!
Have you ever read 'The soft breaking of Harry Potter'? It's rather hot. It's got some real nice kinks in it, you should put some of them in here.
You mentioned Harry being jealous of Dean kissing Ginny. I hope it's because he wanted to be like that with Pansy and not because he wanted Ginny in any way. That, or he mentions feeling like that around Ginny to Pansy and she recognises it as the symptoms of a love potion. Stupid Ginny. Should have been eaten by the Basilisk.
Yeah, put some kinky stuff in!
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoops; forgot to review the second chapter. My apologies.
Another good chapter. It was a tad on the short side, as you said, but I still enjoyed it. It's fun to see the evolution of their relationship, both sexual and otherwise, as they become more familiar with each other. It was also a neat little twist to have Harry stumble into the infamous Ginny/Dean snogging incident, only to walk right by in search of Pansy.
Another good chapter. It was a tad on the short side, as you said, but I still enjoyed it. It's fun to see the evolution of their relationship, both sexual and otherwise, as they become more familiar with each other. It was also a neat little twist to have Harry stumble into the infamous Ginny/Dean snogging incident, only to walk right by in search of Pansy.
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh!!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!!!!!
That was freaking incredible!!! I loved it!! Keep up the great work!! =^^=
That was freaking incredible!!! I loved it!! Keep up the great work!! =^^=
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was an incredibly hot and heavy pairing. I don't think I've ever read a Pansy/Harry fic before and this was defiantly a great one.
Keep up the great work. I'll look forward to more from you in the future.
Keep up the great work. I'll look forward to more from you in the future.
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. I hope this isn't a one shot. Please update soon
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, especially with it being your first "adult" story. I really like the Harry/Pansy pairing, and wish there were more fics centered around them. I like the contrast created by their very different personalities. If you continue ahead with this story, I'll be sure to check it out.