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Bwahahahahhaaaa!! Exposed!!! So much for a secure room, eh?

Great chapter. Keep up the excellent work!

You know what's sad? In this smutfic, you've created a romantic relationship for Harry that is, IMO, light years better and more believable than the one he had in canon--and you did it with a girl who actually hated his guts, no less. I don't know if that's a sign of how well you've woven Pansy into Harry's life, or of how poorly developed the Harry/Ginny relationship was. Maybe both.

Anyways, this keeps getting better and better. Can't wait to see what happens now that Ron and Hermione know. And, in regards to you possibly continuing this story into Deathly Hallows: if you can find a way to make it work, I'd certainly check it out. It seems to me like it would be extremely hard to do, though. If you can't figure out a way to realistically work Pansy into the bulk of DH, maybe you could just do a brief summary of Pansy's time at Hogwarts during the year, and skip ahead to the Battle of Hogwarts?

Wow. That was familiar territory, but it really works in context of Harry and Pansy's relationship. I really appreciated how you delved deep into their thoughts and emotions during such a critical scene for them.

I'm glad that Hermione and Ron catch them inflagrante delicto, there's absolutely no way that Harry can lie his way out of this, but I'm amazed they got in the RoR so easily.

Very emotional and intense chapter, Daye. Well done.

Love your story, keep up the great work!

Found this tonight, read it all at one go.

And I must say, you have a talent for this.

After the last chapter, I have only one word: orgy!

-Karl

Uh Oh!!! Can't be good that Harry's best mates find him naked in bed with Pansy. I can only assume Ron will explode in anger and run off before any explanations can be made.

I came across your story and thought hmmm haven't read a Harry/Pansy story before, this one sounds smut filled, could be interesting... Guess what? I was right it is interesting. Keep on with the writing, I'm enjoying this muchly. Thanks :)

Sigh, cliffy... LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up.

Nice update. I'm really interested to see where you take this. How will the whore of destiny (Ginny Weasley) respond to the recent revelation.

I was just thinking about this chapter. I have to wonder what direction you're taking it in with regards to Dumbles. On the one hand it could be fairly straight forward advice. On the other hand, if an authority figure teenager that the person they're romantically involved with is bad news, and they should be cautious about becoming more involved with them, its kind of expected that the teenager's knee-jerk reaction is going to be to do the exact opposite.

Great update. Did I mention that you make Harry/Pansy sooo much more believable than Rowling made Harry/Ginny.