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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
now that was damn good, and amazingly believable. i could see this happening under the right conditions w/o making anyone ooc.
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's it? I hope there's more to this story coming soon. :P
This was a very interesting story if a bit predictable in some places. Predictability, by the way, isn't a bad thing.
I do hope you write a sequel to this story. :)
This was a very interesting story if a bit predictable in some places. Predictability, by the way, isn't a bad thing.
I do hope you write a sequel to this story. :)
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty awesome. Good stuff. Seriously!
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Just loved it. It was hot, and not just the sex but the romance... there are way too few Harry Pansy Fics out there that are good, and this is definately the best. Of course, i'm sad that this has to end but i guess it works... IF your not planning a sequel about book 7. damn, i would love to see that. how differently would the Hunt go if Pansy were there to held Harrys heart. Of course, there wouldnt bee too many chances for sex, there being four in that tent but if you find a way, go for it.
Loved it all they way. But if you're planning a sequl, please let me know. Because i will read it. Thanks.
Loved it all they way. But if you're planning a sequl, please let me know. Because i will read it. Thanks.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo, happy ending! There aren't enough of those around here.
In sum, an enjoyable read all around. Well done.
In sum, an enjoyable read all around. Well done.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Daye; that was lovely! And don't worry about me being offended at all, I was actually quite flattered. You're reading it again? Well, I guess I better hurry up with Chapter 34 then!
I thought adding the details of canon gave it more texture, and that particular moment of the series is rife for contemplation. I always felt Rowling didn't delve enough into what Harry must have been feeling then. What she did come up with felt too mild for me. Anyway, I love how you portrayed Ron. He's the ultimate best mate, truly, and that line, you hurt Harry, I'll hurt you is the epitome of his character, really. Even Hermione's haughtiness at being left out of the loop of Harry's love life rang true.
Harry needs a crafty girl, so I'm glad Pansy didn't fall for that Hero guff and beat him at his own game. I find their pairing quite satisfying, to be honest. I suppose she could be the female Draco in some ways, so that Harry/Pansy is for the fans who aren't into slash but like that love/hate dynamic. But I think they look good together :) Excellent story!
I thought adding the details of canon gave it more texture, and that particular moment of the series is rife for contemplation. I always felt Rowling didn't delve enough into what Harry must have been feeling then. What she did come up with felt too mild for me. Anyway, I love how you portrayed Ron. He's the ultimate best mate, truly, and that line, you hurt Harry, I'll hurt you is the epitome of his character, really. Even Hermione's haughtiness at being left out of the loop of Harry's love life rang true.
Harry needs a crafty girl, so I'm glad Pansy didn't fall for that Hero guff and beat him at his own game. I find their pairing quite satisfying, to be honest. I suppose she could be the female Draco in some ways, so that Harry/Pansy is for the fans who aren't into slash but like that love/hate dynamic. But I think they look good together :) Excellent story!
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! Congratulations on finishing the story!!! :D
Personally, I loved this. It was so fresh and original that I really really enjoyed reading it. And good for Pansy. Way to stick with her man! I've personally never liked the Ginny/Harry relationship in the books. I mean, yeah, good for Ginny for getting her man by being unavailable. Hermione's real world advice made sense and paid off big time for the girl, but never did she fight for him. Then in the end, she lets him go and gets him back in an epilogue that just came too easy. Personally, I've always felt that Ginny was an easy way for Harry to secure himself within the Weasley family and thats what he wanted all along. A family and not to feel like an awkward outsider to their affections.
Keep up the great work. I'll look forward to more from you in the future! :D
Personally, I loved this. It was so fresh and original that I really really enjoyed reading it. And good for Pansy. Way to stick with her man! I've personally never liked the Ginny/Harry relationship in the books. I mean, yeah, good for Ginny for getting her man by being unavailable. Hermione's real world advice made sense and paid off big time for the girl, but never did she fight for him. Then in the end, she lets him go and gets him back in an epilogue that just came too easy. Personally, I've always felt that Ginny was an easy way for Harry to secure himself within the Weasley family and thats what he wanted all along. A family and not to feel like an awkward outsider to their affections.
Keep up the great work. I'll look forward to more from you in the future! :D
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I hope you do a sequel. I have hope that your version of DH will not suck.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you really going to end it there?!! Oh please write a little more! I'll be your best friend lol. Well if you really are done it was a great story read the whole thing in a day!
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that has got to be the hottest Harry/Pansy pairing I've seen so far...
You are good my friend... Please update soon!!
You are good my friend... Please update soon!!