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for Merciless Flirt

by CryingCinderella

person Lily
schedule March 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really lovely story! I just started reading stories shipping Hermione and Charlie and it's already one of my favorites. I like the way you build the first part of the story around them obviously flirting, and both being really unsure wether the other one felt the same.

I just have one plea - I know it has been a long time since the last update, but I would love to see the conclusion to this story! So I'm hoping for an update sometime in the future!

All the bedst - Line

schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know your a busy bee and all but comeon charlie weasley is worth it. i keep coming back to this hoping youve updated.....sadness always ensues
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not only did you create a believable connection with the characters, you've done a fabulous job with the erotica as well. I like the idea of Charlie introducing Hermione to his work. I liked the description of the first dragon, and I can't wait to see what other physical traits and identities you'll give all the others. Looking forward to reading more of this fic.
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh the interruptions bothered me so much. im not saying that i didnt like it, i loved it, i can just relate to the interruptions. they are so frustrating when they happen. its like youre so close but nope someone has to interrupt you. so frustrating. but i love ypour writting =)
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was great I loved it, please write soon!
person JLY
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like this fic. It has a lot of humor in it. Can't wait to read more :)
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute story, I like Charlie and Hermione's quest to find SOME PLACE SOMEWHERE that they won't be interrupted, lol.
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My, you are just full of surprises. I hope that you are going to give the dragon species' a name. I'd love to see a sapphire blue dragon! I almost wish that I had seen more of Hermoine choosing the students, although I'd expect Dumbledore to have it limited to 7th years with such a small number of spots available. That being said, I love the idea of them taking care of dragons at school and can't wait to read more!

~TSML
person paigeey07
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I'd like it but I do!!!!
person Daye
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Update! I can't think of any in-depth commentary but its nice to see this continued nevertheless. Charlie continues to be immensely fun. Though really, Dragons at Hogwarts seems rather.. dangerous.