rate_review Reviews

Beautifully written.

Keep going, please? :D

I'm really enjoying this - the subtle build up is very good.

Mschelle

Love your writing style. Your words are so emotive. You don't need lots of words to overly express things, which makes it easier for me to escape in your creative world.

There i one problem, though. Your spelling/omitting/grammar typos are quite glaring. The only reason I would complain about this would be because it detracts from the reader's experience of immersing themselves into your story. Then people will not want to read our story, which I don't think is fair with respect to your craft. If you have to spend more time proofreading, I, as the reader, would understand. There's no need to rush submissions just to please the readers.

I wish I had time to clean up the current chapters, but don't, and I don't want to commit and then abandon you. Hopefully you see this review, and come back and continue this story, because it has such potential. :)

I'm loving this story! Completely not what I was expecting. Please Update soon! I will deffinatly be keeping an eye on this story! :D

KCK-Lumcer

i love this story. Cant wait to read more

Soooo need chapter 6!!

poor harry, poor draco!! How long will those two be able to handle this?
I cannot wait for more of this story, and I really really do look forward to the next update!!!
please let it be soon!!

I think that what they should do is just handcuff each of them to a twin. Then no one will have any fun for a month.

Soooo need chapter 5!!! Will Draco also see Harry's life?

Soooo need chapter 4!!! Draco is hiding his feelings from Harry? Interesting!!!