rate_review Reviews

I have been reading fanfiction for well over two years, and never have I read such a fantastic line as this:

"It did occur to him, even before this shameful bout of depression, that he much preferred what was on the outside to what was on the inside."

If tht doesn't sum up Snape I don't know what does. Just amazing.

I wonder if you would be interested in me Beta'ing your writing? This is a great story, but the grammar and typos get in the way a bit. I'm happy to help (not that I'm an expert - if fact, I have only just become a Snarry fan and normally read / write HGSS...) but this is so good and I would love to see you develop it to it's full potential.

If you want some help, email me here: neelix_2000@yahoo.com

Wow.

I loved these chapters!

Update soon!

Unloveable? I love it!

(Okay, so I couldn't resist the cheesy pun.)
Keep up the great work!

I like this story. The tone of the characters seems true to the cannon. Can't wait to read more.

Please do keep up the good work. I must admit, I wish that you could have provided me a bit more detail concerning the sexual positions. You lost me a little before the chair was shoved away and then I understood what position they were in. Otherwise the porn sequence was fantastic. What will Ginny say to this Snape/Potter relationship? And what about the rest of the Weasley clan and Ron and Hermione?

and i recced you here at asylums.insanejournal.com/bottomsnape/ (nc-17 rated entries are friendlocked though!)

I think it's fantastic, even though you were shooting for porn the way you write gave life to a story and feelings that people never explore but would probably like tp. keep it up however you do it!

its wonderful, can't wait to see what harry and severus do next.

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im interested to see where u take this. keep it up!