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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Do you plan on updating this? Because this is amazing! It's original and I love where you're going with it. I hope it gets updated!
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting mix of story cliches you've put together here. I'm sorry to see it discontinued.
Nekoshin stories are not ones I generally read--preferring to keep Japan & Japanese culture in the anime and manga fandoms--although I do enjoy creature fics. I would have liked to have seen how you would have explained Japanese demon blood/genes entering Harry's make-up.
I also enjoy founder stories--whether it's Harry travelling back, or the Founders travelling forward, or their spirits/paintins/etc being rediscovered. I would have liked to have seen you explain why they were reanimated 500 years ago, how long they lived each life revitalization--since they originally lived over 1000 years ago, and it was in the late 900's to early 1100's when Hogwarts was constructed/first opened, how long did they live then? Did they "die" or something else occur that allowed them to "come back to life"? What happened in the 1500's/1600's that they reappeared? If they reappeared 500 years ago, why is the wizarding world so surprised they did it again? Or is the excitement concerning them finally reappearing again?
I was also looking forward to learning more of their backgrounds and personal histories. How did the story of Salazar and Godric being enemies get circulated if the two are bonded? How did the Gaunts inherit the Slytherin bloodline? What of the two ladies' families? Why are they so content to be brought back to life just for Sal and Godric to claim their mate? Why do Salazar and Godric even have a mate?
And then beyond all that...I now have fearsome images in my head of Salazar or Godric forcing themselves onto Harry in an almost brutal mating that leaves Harry almost broken--timid and cowed, possibly pregnant--before they sit him down and explain to him the whole mate-thing. I can see it, you know... They're alone in a classroom or chamber. Harry says something that infuriates the other. He grabs at Harry to shake him, and then procedes to kiss him, forcing his mouth over Harry's, his tongue shoving into Harry's mouth as he's pushed back against the stone wall, wrists held against the scraping stone. He struggles, but the man is unrelenting. And then, with a tingle of magic, their clothes vanish and it's skin against hot skin against cold stone. It's a harsh whisper of "Sorry, but I can't wait any longer" as more magic dancing along his skin and *inside* him, and he's roughly turned around to face the stone as the man steps up behind him and quickly forces himself inside Harry. And with a wham!bam!thank you ma'am!, he finds his release and completes his claiming with a, "Now you are mine."
But a lot grittier--not at all appropriate for a review. And I won't get to read it or even the counterpart to it because the story's discontinued. [le sigh] Oh, well!
Nekoshin stories are not ones I generally read--preferring to keep Japan & Japanese culture in the anime and manga fandoms--although I do enjoy creature fics. I would have liked to have seen how you would have explained Japanese demon blood/genes entering Harry's make-up.
I also enjoy founder stories--whether it's Harry travelling back, or the Founders travelling forward, or their spirits/paintins/etc being rediscovered. I would have liked to have seen you explain why they were reanimated 500 years ago, how long they lived each life revitalization--since they originally lived over 1000 years ago, and it was in the late 900's to early 1100's when Hogwarts was constructed/first opened, how long did they live then? Did they "die" or something else occur that allowed them to "come back to life"? What happened in the 1500's/1600's that they reappeared? If they reappeared 500 years ago, why is the wizarding world so surprised they did it again? Or is the excitement concerning them finally reappearing again?
I was also looking forward to learning more of their backgrounds and personal histories. How did the story of Salazar and Godric being enemies get circulated if the two are bonded? How did the Gaunts inherit the Slytherin bloodline? What of the two ladies' families? Why are they so content to be brought back to life just for Sal and Godric to claim their mate? Why do Salazar and Godric even have a mate?
And then beyond all that...I now have fearsome images in my head of Salazar or Godric forcing themselves onto Harry in an almost brutal mating that leaves Harry almost broken--timid and cowed, possibly pregnant--before they sit him down and explain to him the whole mate-thing. I can see it, you know... They're alone in a classroom or chamber. Harry says something that infuriates the other. He grabs at Harry to shake him, and then procedes to kiss him, forcing his mouth over Harry's, his tongue shoving into Harry's mouth as he's pushed back against the stone wall, wrists held against the scraping stone. He struggles, but the man is unrelenting. And then, with a tingle of magic, their clothes vanish and it's skin against hot skin against cold stone. It's a harsh whisper of "Sorry, but I can't wait any longer" as more magic dancing along his skin and *inside* him, and he's roughly turned around to face the stone as the man steps up behind him and quickly forces himself inside Harry. And with a wham!bam!thank you ma'am!, he finds his release and completes his claiming with a, "Now you are mine."
But a lot grittier--not at all appropriate for a review. And I won't get to read it or even the counterpart to it because the story's discontinued. [le sigh] Oh, well!
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November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update already!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. please keep writing. You are one of the few that i have saved and check on for new updates!
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July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue and finish this story. I really love what you have posted so far, and I would to see a happy ending. Thanks.
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just reviewed over at ffnet but I figured another review couldn't hurt... could it? I love Fred and George and Neko!Harry is so adorable! :D This has everything I've been looking for in a fic lately and I need more! Please? 0:) *bats lashes innocently*
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April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
writing great chapters takes a little hard work, well researched ideas, and the WILL to finish said works of art.
so, when are we *see* you again?
so, when are we *see* you again?
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April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
writting takes a little bit of hard, well researched ideas, and the WILL to see them done.
so, lovely lady, when will we *see* again?
so, lovely lady, when will we *see* again?
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Please update it soon. It will be interesting to see how Godric and Salazar react to Harry's abuse.