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Intense, amazing and dark ........ Perfect

A very interesting tale thus far. Keep up the good work.

I really like this story, I hope that you will continue with it - I would like to see more of this series, it s very interesting

Please do me a favor, make Hermione appear as a ghost even alaive in a coma or something. Harry deserves a little hope, and something to fight for other than revenge or maybe a little romance with someone! Please

So, Ishtar is really Hedwig, Harry's own owl? That really takes Beastiality to a whole other level, doesn't it?

You manage to combine the unique magic of the Potter 'Verse and your own style of Horror to a really well rounded story. Interesting plotline, especially as the "Goal" changes from defeating LV to a personal vendetta. You even have realistic and interesting character development rarely found in FanFiction. The only criticism I can come up with, is that you use American English, and not British English, which is a minor point at most.

I understand you already got a beta, so I'm late to offer, should you still or again need someone to proof read your chapters, I'm willing to give it a go.

kage

well you did get me on who harry had helping him. i figured it was fluire since she would have trouble with english having to think of what she wanted to say in french then try to translate it to english. harry's owl never even came to mind.i started with the clue of the personknowing were headquarters was so an order member and female and trouble speaking. now i should have known it was not fluire when it took harry weeks to figure out who she was. as far as master goes i just wrote that off to fliure being bound to harry for saving gabby from the lake.

now i would like to read some sex scenes sometime soon.

a way for harry to get more cores would be to hide out just outside the leaky culdren with a dark arts detector set to pick up the dark mard, so whenever a marked deatheaters left going into muggle london harry could just pick them off.

Very interesting. I like it.

...Cloud? Fucking really?

Is his middle name DeathdemonkillangelSephirothMcBadass too?

Fuck me sideways...This is awesome! I can't believe I missed this gem being posted sooner!
This is a great change from pussy!Harry that forgives everyone who fucked him over and slung him in Azkaban. Harry actually going out and kicking ass in gruesome ways is great.
I can't wait to read more and think you should switch focus to this story, it's great!
When are you going to tell everyone that Ishtar is Hedwig? I'd have thought you'd have done so by now. I'm interested in knowing your explanation behind this. Was she an owl who suddenly decided to become a humanmagus or a witch trapped in her owl animagus form, or something else? I hope we see an answer soon.
Greatly looking forward to more!