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for The Master of Assassins

by fantasyra

person Wolfric
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your fine story; although my taste is not generally for such dark characters. Thanks for writing. W.
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please don't tell me Tonks is the rat! She's a sweetheart and a shape shifter! Can't this be a set up of someone claiming it was Tonks who just shifted to look like them? pretty please???? Mione is alive???? Susan..well she was even messed up even in the movies..
person firebird57
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter,I hope that Cloud/Harry solve the problem as to the traiter.I was wondering what the girls are up to visiting the Grangers?awaiting next update.
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My poor darling Harry............ OK she is a heroe........ so Hemione to the rescue? LOL It could be his reason to live. BRAVO That was a wonderful surprise....... THX
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright. In all honesty, I think that Harry should have his hindquarters handed to him. Better yet, I think that he should be killed off and I hope Luna, Susan, and Hannah are the ones to do him in. Or maybe have one of his gollums exercise a little free will and rip Harry apart.
person azphxbird57
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much.I bet the ministy will try to mess over Cloud/Harry.
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Completley awesome!!!! once you finish it, publish it!!!!! I want this in my library, it fecking great!!! E-mail me with updates please? Mt.Mischief1987@hotmail.com
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok Harry is getting more...... how do we put it deadlier......... LOL.......... Keep them coming..........
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!
Continuuuuuue,
Z.
person drag0nsclaw
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the order seems to be acting very dark for a so called light organisation. And as for moody isn't it rarther ironic that someone trained to murder people thinks that hes a light wizard while harry's dark?