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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting choice in names for children. And yes, it always amuses me to the levels that Severus falls when he has daughters- in any quantity. Epilogue should pose interesting. Looking forward to it.
~CC
~CC
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as short as the chapters were and how little they gave away, this is an extremely well thought out and well done story! i agree with you on all parts about hermione and i like what you did with her character. as much as i love happy endings and sappy love stories, i get sick of how hermione is always the brain and the strongest emotionally and ends up helping everyone including severus. anyways great story! i LOVE it! keep it coming!!
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Twas brilliant.
I think its a perfectly finite and succinct ending to it all.
Been a pleasure reading.
xoxo
CryingCinderella
I think its a perfectly finite and succinct ending to it all.
Been a pleasure reading.
xoxo
CryingCinderella
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Explains the why of the relationship. I have enjoyed the story and the naunces.
Mare
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Loved it and yes Snape is indeed very much canon isn't he? Quite like he should be or we imagine the real him should be and what JKR wants him to be. So where are the last three chapters you promised?? Come on! Your Readers are hungry for more! Hurry!
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Intense. I did like the timid attempt he made to throw her off. And the bit with Lucius was a nice change of pace.
~CC
~CC
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very intense.
The kiss chapter was by far my favourite, perhaps aside from Horror.
It is rapt and real, quick yet brutal and detailed. I loved it. are there more to finish these vinyettes? Perhaps pieces you've left out? It seems to have a perfect ending but this style is incredible.
Intense. Truly incredible.
~CryingCinderella
The kiss chapter was by far my favourite, perhaps aside from Horror.
It is rapt and real, quick yet brutal and detailed. I loved it. are there more to finish these vinyettes? Perhaps pieces you've left out? It seems to have a perfect ending but this style is incredible.
Intense. Truly incredible.
~CryingCinderella
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so bad yet so good at the same time!!!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking how this is going and cannot wait for the end. More please!
Mare
Mare
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February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This looks like he is atoning himself. Looking forward to the next.
Mare
Mare