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Good chapter,It looks like Harry has entered the world of love and sex.Keep up the good work.

just finished the first 18 chapters. VERY impressed! I love how you are adapting the story, it's really interesting. Will Cho become an animagus? Or a major player in the story?

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter i love this story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Amazing story i hope you keep up the good work

loved it!

good chapter. yea i'm excited for sirius. on top of hermione being older date wise she is older due to the time turner in third year as well.

Good chapter,I really enjoyed the filler information the kid gave while talking to Sirius.

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

I never did like the part with the attack by Nagini in the book. Heck I never liked Rowlings statement either; "I didn't kill Arthur because he was the only decent father figure in the book." and then killing Remus and Nymphadora for; "I need to make up for sparing Arthur previously in the book." Sometimes I wonder if she didn't hire a ghostwriter for the last two books. At least this time it was more exciting although I don't like the idea that Dumbledore saw Harry's animagus form. (old meddler that he is) I'm looking forward to the next few chapters and appologize it looks like the last time I tried to leave a review last night my message didn't make it. (my computer is a little wonky) Thanks for the chappie!

thank you for another chapter i love this story a few major mistakes in this one thou instead of barrow it should be loan and the quiddich position isint searcher but seeker thanks for sharing this fantastic chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.