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i love this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

good chapter, i really enjoyed it.

i was wondering why ther was no chapter yester day maby since its valantines you can give us two chapter to make up for it (please) any way thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

thank you for the additional chapter i loved it it was hot as hell thank you for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a = as soon as life allows

I love the story so far! Just wanted to tell you that feela is actually spelled veela. Otherwise, good job on your excellent English!

i just cant get enough of this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter

a good short chapter.

Sorry again for the late review but I need to get some medical help but I'll be okay in a couple of days and I love whats going on lately. You know I'm happy that Harry will be able to help Neville's parents but you bring up an old but true point with all of Harry's "power boost". Forgive me for waxing classic poetic (and probably butchering it) "Wisemen fear absolute power for absolute power corrupts absolutely" or something like that. I wonder if Harry ever heard the other old saying (one that I took to heart as a child) "With great power comes great responsibility!" Harry's going to have to learnor study to control his new powers. Keep up the great work and good to review again. (Darn I'm itchy)

i can see it harry uses his soul stealing power to kill the soul fragment that is hiding in his mind and gains its power and knowledge to become a parsal mouth forever hahahahaha lol i love this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Great chapters ;)
Continuuuuuue,
Z.