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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An Excellent story, well written and compelling. Some minor spelling and grammar errors, but to be expected, as I presume english is not your first language.
Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter (34) and following chapters.
Well done
Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter (34) and following chapters.
Well done
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay a new fantastic chapter thank you for sharing please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i actually really really love this story
but i am not on here a lot so i dont get the updates until about 3 to 4 days later
is there any chance you could email me the updates instead
but i am not on here a lot so i dont get the updates until about 3 to 4 days later
is there any chance you could email me the updates instead
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update update. nice story, real nice
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, and I see the battle in the ministry
Luck and good job
Luck and good job
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Found this a couple days ago, read all of it already. Love the way ya made 'em react realistically to situations. Keep writin' man, awesome work so far.
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good, am liking what you have done with it so far.
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter i realy love this story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this dark Harry with endless powers........
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have to disagree with what Harry did to those Death Eaters.... wiping their minds clean would have been WELL MORE than enough punishment for those people..... to do what Harry did just shows that he is letting power go to his head.
And, need I remind.... by JKR's books.... these people wouldn't have been so bad if the "Muggles" wouldn't have gone on a killing spree against Magicals, to the point where they hated and distrusted ALL of them. Harry should also focus on bringing the magicals out into the open in this story, and setting up allies in the Muggle world.
And, need I remind.... by JKR's books.... these people wouldn't have been so bad if the "Muggles" wouldn't have gone on a killing spree against Magicals, to the point where they hated and distrusted ALL of them. Harry should also focus on bringing the magicals out into the open in this story, and setting up allies in the Muggle world.