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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tis a good story. However, it seems like you're turning Harry into Hitler. Charasmatic, well loved while being dismissed by the government, and sactioning human experimentations. I can almost see his S-Class standing in the shadows while the rest of the DO chant "Sieg heil!" to him. Granted, that wouldn't stop me from reading. I look forward to seeing more.
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know this might be a little nit-picky, but it is OOTP, not TOoP. The fact that you can't even get that right makes me not want to read the story
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story and if you need a new beta just drop me a line I would be glad to help
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yha a new chapter i love this story i dont care if ther not bata read il read them any ways please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AH! Final Battle and OoP All in one............ Like it!
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, other than the spelling and incorrect word usage, but, considering english isn't your primary language, it's not that big a problem. My concern is, how do we get alerts for a new chapter? I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great plot overall, keep it up. On a side note if you need anyone to beta a chapter or two just give me a shout and ill do my best.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed your story so far, some of the parts are dull or seem to be empty but it is a well written story with a decent plot. I would suggest starting a new thread for SP II and SP III. This way there is a clean separation between your breaks in the story which im assuming will be the summer break. Thanks again for this story i look forward to your next post.
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like very much this Harry is dark but at the same time a hero.........