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for Shadow Phoenix

by CainBlack

person Shago123
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HI
i just started reading ur fic about 4 to 5 hours ago. i havent been able to stop since. im at ch. 26 at the moment, and seeing how its 3am right now i figured i call it a night. I love the story. i feel as if im reading the 5th book all over agian but better. i love the fact that Herminoe is with Harry only. I also have a question...J wanted to know harrys size?? and the womens sizes. anyways great work, i love the plot cant wait to finish the rest tomorrow.

-Arshag-
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your alive ya! thank you for continuing this i love this story please update again a.s.a.l.a.
person azphxbrd
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter,I dont think I would have given Fudge the toad (Umbridge) that easly.Keep up the good work.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34 you wrote "rip of the right sleeves of their robes" shouldn't it have been the left sleeve? I thought the Dark Mark was on the left arm?
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Harry borrowed them his Firebolt" the word is LOANED, not borrowed. He loaned TO them/ He borrowed FROM them
person vicki
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my god there has got to be more of this freaking story there just has to be don't say it's over please please preeeeeetttttyyyy please
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sigh still no new update but i have hope that you are just having trobal with life and havent abandend this fantastic story
person Jenna
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to see how you get the DO out of there and what Dumbles has to say about it.
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to get worried that you haven't posted an unbetaed chapter yet i hpoe you are still wrighting as this is a fantastic story thou you should probably post it on more than just this site any ways please update a.s.a.l.a.
person Squeaky
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi I think that the story is great so far but my main concern is the spelling. I have noticed that you have between 10 and 50 mistakes a chapter.

Keep up the good work

Squeaky