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i love this story thank you for sharing it please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows

Good chapter,I hope Draco takes in Harry's words of wisdom to realize that his father and the other DEs are stupid slaves to old Voldy.

Good overall story so far,I have finally caught up on my reading.Keep up the good work.

A few mistakes
What you wrote/possible corrections
slitherin /Slytherin
At Saturday a owl of Percy arrived Ron/ On Saturday, an owl of Percy arrived for Ron.
Do you have come to a decision, Draco, heir of Lord of Malfoy/ Have you come to a decision
Don't worry, Ron. I'll remember you/ Don't worry Ron I'll remind you
I am not that great on the rules of grammar and spelling myself but those are the ones that jumped out at me. I am curious on why Harry would pay Slytherin's I mean most of that house are rich pure bloods anyways. If he has to pay them I wouldn't trust them.

I'm sorry the anon review (about the spelling mistakes) was mine I didn't realize that I forgot to type in my user name until I hit the submit key.

Seems like Harry is more serious than the rest of his friends except maybe Neville. He has a more adult mindset and a better understanding of what they face. Is he going to stick with the younger crowd exclusively or will he have some adult company as well? Love the fast updates. Keep going.

he had two pussy...cats to play with. lol.

I wish all(or at least some) of my favorite stories are updated like this one.)

First off let me say I've just read several chapters of your story and I can say that I am impressed and so far intriqed by with what I've read. I wonder where Harry got that throne from. Is Hermione going to have some "Harry Time" too. Will Cho? Will Harry figure out about Dumbledore's manipulations of his life? Like I said you've got me interested. But I've got two questions to ask. 1. is Tonks going to be with Harry in this one? (Not that I don't like Remus but I like them together even friends with benefits.) And the second is can you please err... how can I say this with out sounding violent??? Hmmm... Alas I can not so here I go... PLEASE PUNISH, PULVERIZE, POUND, OR ANNILATE THAT PINK CARRIGAN (did I spell that right?) WEARING TOAD SPAWN SHE BITCH!!!!! I believe Ms. Rowling said it best the worst the villian the better the hero. I simply dispise and loath Umbritch with a passion!!!! Well I got more to read and if I think of anything to say or share I let you know and thank you for the great read so far!!! Keep up the great writing!!!

Okay I just got from chapter 9-12 and you were right Malfoy is a insufurable git! I wonder if animagus is shaped by transformations by others? heeheeheehee ferret, Hermione would end up getting a feline form but she would probably like it being similar to Professor McGonacall. I do wonder what the animangus forms will be (oh no the twins will be skunks). I can't wait for more so thanks again and keep up the good work!!!