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loved it!

great chapter! Are you posting your fictions anywhere else. Because it is hard to keep track of stories on this site, I would love to follow you somewhere else too.

And it begins Umbritch (misspelled by choice) I hope Harry's "shadow" records everything that...that...'government offical' does illegally perfectly cause without evidence she'll be a pain in the future. So Harry and Hermione are going to get "help" from Rita Skeeter too. (Oh boy here comes trouble.) well if she gives them trouble Harry and Hermione could always "punish" her. Speaking of punishing is Harry and compeny going to give the Dursleys some of there payback? When does more Luna time come in? There are four girls that I love in the story 1. Tonks (magic-goth) 2. Hermione (rule girl raeady to break them) 3. Luna (you don't know what going to happen next) 4. Fleur (beautiful and dangerous)cause they always liven up the story. Of course that's my opinion. Just a question does it bother anyone else that Dumbledore's plan was so risky that it could have gone wrong in just about the smallest of chances? I mean really!!! I know he's 153 years old but I think senility set in sometiem and where. I enjoyed your new chapters and can't wait for more and thank you for the story so far. Keep up the great writing. I wonder if they could use Mrytle for some spying?

great chapter!

loved it!

good chapter!

loved it, but the house names you are writing I's instead of Y's. It's spelled GRYFFINDOR or SLYTHERIN

loved it!

i would rather have un-beta chapters than nothing.

loved it!