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that was so freaking hot

I realize you wrote this a long time ago and so I don't know if you'll read this review, but I had to leave one. This is amazing! I couldn't put it down. It is absolutely brilliant.

whoo hoo that was sexy *fanning self* :)

Positively stunning, an absolutely beautiful piece of work. Speaking from years and years of beta reading and simply being a ridiculous Drarry fan (not to mention from all this higher education in writing, wot), I can say this is truly one of the best pieces I've ever read on the matter. You are truly a talented author - brilliant here, really. I discovered you only recently, frankly, and though it sounds terribly melodramatic and suck-up-ish of me, I really try to read your pieces quite sparingly because they have such an emotional effect on me and - I would assume - all your readers (unfortunately, I tend to stick to the OneShots because if I engaged my interest in a multi-chapter affair, I'm afraid I would never go to class again!). Not to mention, you seem to have a finger on the perfect pulse of what makes this particular pairing so attractive, arousing, and just damn hot.
I hope you actively use your writing ability outside of fanfiction, or at least plan to. I'd love to read something entirely of your own creation (ah, if only I had the foresight and adult patience to fully read author profiles, I'm sure most of my questions would be answered, ha!).
Thank you for sharing something so fantastic with us!

This WAS nice.

I wish you would do your 8 chapter stories again like you used to,
with plots that reflect themes like this.

A simple romance, where Harry wines & dines Draco.

love.

Very nice!!! I soooo enjoyed this!!!

I always try to review with my first thoughts after reading a story; with this one they were: "A rather good story my dear, a rather good story indeed." Anyway, in other words THIS STORY ROCKED!! I really liked it, but you haven't yet managed to write a story that I read a didn't enjoy. Good work! Good luck, good health, and happy writing!!

That was terribly complicated. The vow was Harry couldn't have WILLING sex. If he'd been raped, it wouldn't be willing and thus the vow would still be valid. Plus even if that hadn't happened Harry could still have a family AND be a virgin. Artificial insemination ring any bells? Semen into a cup is still within the vow.

that must've been the shortest virginity vow ever. What did he hold out for? two months. Oh well, he is a teen aged boy