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Why is it that we all find Ron to be an insensitive boor? Yet there it is,he makes the perfect counterpoint to the sensitive and masterful Snape. How delightful that while you leave SS and HG in suspense you also allow Ron to make it plain that SS has a chance. Thanks. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

OMFG you hvave no idea more much I've been enjoying this.
WELL DONE.

*poke* Moar!

Must have update soon!

Hmmm... lets see. Since i'm writing my own Snape fic I think i can guess whats going to happen next. Snape is going to feel utterly rejected because Hermione ran into the arms of a boyfriend he has not only hated for years, but a boyfriend who has failed to give her the sexual pleasure she deserved (and many other reasons in which i don't feel like writing down at the moment lol). Instead of being honest and telling her how he feels of course he'll be a snarky asshole and just make things more complicated. Oh Snape :( ... anyway great story! I absolutely loooove smut and this smut was really good. You have a grace in writing your own that i wish i had. I feel that when i write smut myself that it comes out kind of forced. I wish they had a rule book on how to write smut .... :D Sorry i'm being silly tonight. Again, I think this is an amazing story. I hope you can keep it up. If you ever need help trying to get the whole entire ten pages written I'll be happy assist. Just go to my profile. My info's all there! Again, good job! I'm bookmarking your story and following the whole way through! :D

Have been enjoying this story.

I hope Hermione kicks him to the curb! She seems quite submissive to Ron, is there an underlying abuse in their relationship?

Aah! Seriously...? She would leave Severus for Ron and run away without even looking back at Sev....? The cruel woman! I want to knock come sense into her. Dear god, she knew Ron was cheating on her and she did nothing? Grow a backbone woman and leave him! How dare he get angry that she's not willing to have sex. Pfft, git.

Anyway, on to what I did like about this chapter :) - I loved the dressing scene at the beginning. It's small moments like this that I love to see. It's a lovely quiet intimacy you've captured really well. And I adored the them running through that strange corridor hand in hand without them realising it. Fantastic. Looking forward to more hun,

Wolf

ooooooo and the plot thickens !!!dun dun duh!!! lol well you've convinced me that ron is infact an arse hole lol and that I much prefer hermione with severus :D I felt bad though when she left him in the corridor though :/. Another great chapter and can't wait for the next one! i'm eager to see what "things" he can teach her lol. keep up the good work

Damn her conscious, Ron, his timing, the fact that she left Severus standing there, the fact that he'll never believe Ron slept on the sofa, and the fact that this chapter had to end. lol Yes, I loved it and want more, as soon as possible. I need to see Severus' pain assuaged when she declares she wants him and only him. :-) Thank you, HG4eva

Excellent stuff. Shows real understanding of the two main characters. And I love the younger Hogwarts pupils.

I like where this is going -- please write more!