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by MissLibrarian

schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First Herminone/Snape fic I've read in a while, its quite good, I'm defiantly enjoying it. wonder how Ron will find out? Walk in on them kissing maybe? Don't let him be to abusive physically, that would be to much of a twist of character. I love the snarky Potions Master you made. I always wondered if it was because he wasn't getting laid enough....
person drifterintimeandspace
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a well written story with a well thought out and plausible storyline. This is one of the few Snape/Hermonine fanfics that I actually sought out elsewhere to determine if there had been updates. While not a die hard fan of Harry Potter, I did enjoy Snape and Hermonine and to pair them up, well that's just a bonus :D. Keep going!
person Phoenix Rhapsody
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I thought this was the last chapter! Thank God it's not! Please update soon! I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait!
person Starbridge
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I'd love for Hermione to see that last conversation in a pensieve! She couldn't accuse Severus of making it up that way, and boy would her angry explosion afterwards be great!
person Trish
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Sev/Mione stories I've read since Ms. Figg's muse abandoned her in the middle of a piece called "A Dark Scenario," over 3 weeks ago. Your work is well-written, considers the characters as written by JKR w/o losing your own voice, and makes me hunger for more. Kudos! You truly are an excellent Fic writer. Now, please post more. You have my thanks.
Trish
person Aurette
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely! Please update soon.
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!

I always love when students get cheeky with Hermione - Severus to teh rescue! I especially liked the little Ron/Severus intercation - this Ron is really quite clueless and Hermione needs to grow a backbone, stop feeling obligated and/or afraid to be alone and confront him.

Brilliantly done!

*runs off to friend you over on LJ*
person alina290
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying reading this story. I want to see what Hermione is going to tell Severus or better yet ask him. Ron seems to be abusive, am I wrong? Good work.
Liz
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Okay, I was so very much shifting between pi**ed off and amused with the 'conversation' between Severus and Ron. The absolute cheek of that idiot Ron asking Severus if Hermione's been cheating on him (pi**ed off part)and the wonderful contradiction of truth that Severus was thinking about with his lovely encounter with Hermione (amused part). At least they're both (Sev and Hermione) seeing the truth now and hoping for more and I can only hope it get's better from here. I'm not liking cheating at all, even with Severus, but I'm so very much hoping it gets better and they both get what they want.

Oh, and I love how you write Severus. In character and a different side I don't see often if at all. It's fantastic to think there is still so much more to Severus' character despite him being written thousands of ways. (loved your opening paragraph for this chapter by the way as well ;))

Looking forward to more,

Wolf
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who HATES honorable Severus? There's no guarantee that there will be some hot smut when he gets that way. LOL Ron is SUCH an asshole and I hopes Hermione humiliates him and leaves him. He's nothing but trash! I'm enjoying very much and I hope Severus resists the the temptation to be honorable and enjoys himself. He deserves it!